change ur r and t

 

move your letters closer together

 

bump [/b][/quote]
i hate bein at the bottom of the page...

 

pretty good, not likin the s that much, id work on that

and as much as u want to put quotes there, quotes are extremely overused now, and u'd be suprised how far u can get without them, or without any add ons.

otherwise, ur good to go

 

cezr your getting close to hotfire status. i know you werent asking for crits but i wanna bump this to show the toys whats up.
when are we gonna trade stickers?

 

cezr your getting close to hotfire status. i know you werent asking for crits but i wanna bump this to show the toys whats up.
when are we gonna trade stickers? [/b][/quote]
Thanks homeboy! That means alot. I'm backed up on sticker trades right now but after I get my 4 long overdue trades out, I'll deffinately holler at you.

 

theres no S... maybe u meant the D (first letter)?

 

:wub: I cant wait, I need to get a b book though.

 

theres no S... maybe u meant the D (first letter)? [/b][/quote]
he definitely means the K he thinks it says disor
99% sure i am because i am clearly of scientist status
and by scientist i mean ghetto
and by status i mean urchin

 

Thx for the C.C. Im left handed, so sometimes I drag my hand across and it messes up. The "T" is supposed to be more sharp in a sense. But thx.

 

dude...take that outa ur sig.. its guna make u look bad lol

 

he definitely means the K he thinks it says disor
99% sure i am because i am clearly of scientist status
and by scientist i mean ghetto
and by status i mean urchin [/b][/quote]
oooi see it now... no it says dkor... haha

 

In dire need of critiqueing, no good bombers in my neighborhood and didnt want to start bombin till I worked on my style.

 

noit a bad start

look at alot of tags and see how people do theirs then write poet a billion times and u will come out with somthing nice

 

Drop the P and don't invert your "italics " (They face the other way..)

 

Thanks, I was sorta worried "poet" was already taken, but I havent seen it. I dont see what you mean by drop the p, but thanks for the advice. I tried checkin our that mr wiggles site to see how to write it but I didnt like the style. Im sorta trien to find a devinair type style.

 

By "drop the P" I meant scratch it and try a different one comepletely. You can keep "Poet" just do a different P. Hell, you don't have to listen to me tho. You can keep it if you really like it, but it doesn't flow. As far as the italics, you'll find they are best used by pointing them SLIGHTLY in towards the word, put relatively close together, nearly as big as ther lettering, and of course everything looks better with a chisel tip....Also your T looks like a Y.
Tiny italics pointed backwards can make a nice handstyle look awful.
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An example...

 

Thanks bro, Ill work on the italics, and I see what ya mean. Ill probably stay up tonight workin on the "p" But thanks again.

 

Glad I could help. Good luck!