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i make too many throws, i cant pick just one....

 

likin the first one better.

 

Hey Guys I Havent Been On In A While But In The Mean Time I Came Up With a Newer Piece and CRITS??

 

i like the 2nd one the 1st one is too squareish on the top

 

alright, ill just do somthen and then post it befo i color it. probably pretty soon

 

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a half assed sketch..AS..was gonna do a asti..but a dont like it...so a stopped..and this is the only think a got to upload the now

 

if the letters were more along he same line and actually inked and stuff id probably like it

 

it says pieces...not sketches. in any case, it's good work...the s isn't thick enough though...just liiiiitle bit thicker. keep it up.

 

yea the space in the middle of them is where the arm of the T was gonna go..like the left hand side of it ....a dunno

 

lmfao ..... the only thing you run is your mouth homey! you should spend more time trying to get better instead of trying to play the part cuz you have ZERO skills.

 

so ive been on vacation for the past 2 weeks, havent been sketching, but this is my last, 2 wk old sketch, but i think its the best ive ever done
was for a battle

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crits please!

 

Here's a new one I did, trying to keep it simple, any thoughts would be helpful

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Alot better then your last one and I like the fact that your trying to keep it simple and not get ahead of yoruself, I dont know what else to say really just keep sketchin.

 

Thanks, I just did up another quick one, just trying to get basic structure down with the letters. I'm trying to draw like 10 mins everyday or more, just to keep ideas constantly flowing.

 

Here's the next one, same stuff basically but I was going to color it, my red ran out so I said fuck it lol. Just focus more on the letters ;x

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new loki sketch trying to take into account previous crits, the o and the k are no longer making love, but i dunno, its kinda blocky and uninspired, i need to add some flair, but i wanted to see what people thought of the plain lettering first, no use trying to spruce up shit...
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ive been messing around with spuck too, im thinking ill add somekinda jagged comic book special effect background to it at some point....

any critisism appreciated

 

Dont like it sorry

looks nothing like graff just someone writing block letters

 

isn't that what graffiti is in its most basic primative form? Spuck, it looks cleaner and more sharp which is good, and you are sticking to simple lettering which is better- try and add little details here and there to give it some personality...


edit: stay away from arrows too.

 

yo sieet what kind of pens you us??