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i realized that actually, but sinec theyre not connected it still doesnt seem to flow. keep working on it. eype dont overlap 3d over ur letters. kurex keep ur letters the same size. ugly get off the side of the page. work in the center. peace.
am i an advanced toy? no hard feelings, just lay out the facts. if so, lets go if not, fuck u haha peace.
i realized that actually, but sinec theyre not connected it still doesnt seem to flow. keep working on it. eype dont overlap 3d over ur letters. kurex keep ur letters the same size. ugly get off the side of the page. work in the center. peace. [/b][/quote] my advice is to keep the 3d overlap, when done right it pops so hard .... im working hard to add that element to my letters right now . . .
go with whoever you want, but i dont think anyone should be working on that in this forum yet. ur the best here so ur an exception, u should remember that. i think he should keep working on the letters and pieces in general before adding such a hard concept.
for you sky. . . i rarely post up a pic from a battle thats not up yet, but fuck it, im bored 2. gimmie some good crits. i used some cheap ass silver n red spraypaint and a pink dont to make the background. thought it looked dope, but then my fuckin prismas wouldnt show up on the paint. so i had to use a much darker color then i wanted and it still doesnt show up well. o well. i might have to do another piece b/c of this. peace.
did you try to spray paint on paper then try to put marker over top? cuz that wont work ... i tried spray paint on a page in my blackbook once. i did my piece then ripped pieces of paper to cover the piece, taped the outside (so piece is covered and wont be sprayed on) then i sprayed the page trying to get the can to flood so i could get some nice fat drips . . . so advice #1 is start over with the way i tried or get yourself some paint markers (u can do soo much more w/ paint markers over reg markers) as for the letters . .. . i dont know . .. not really my style (kinda plain) but it might look better if the letters were more snug together maybe with each letter at a lil bit of an angle (first letter slants NW, next letter slants NE, next letter slants NW, etc .. . ) .. im just tryin to think of ways to get yoour letters to interact more (and yeah i know you havent put a 3d in yet but you still have too much room inbetween each) ... if you wnat i can pm you a quick sketch when i get home showing you what i mean .... alot of times when i sketch i just stop and stare at where i am and where i want to go with it (every 10 mins) do you see the lil shoot off on the bottom left leg of your M, repeate that throughout the peice, maybe try it at the bottom of the right leg of your Ns .. . pinch the the middle part of the M a lil more to have a more dynamic letter . . . . and the letters progressively get smaller, when your skecth with a pencil dont accept that shit, erase and try again . . .
thats exactly what i tried to do. i had never done it before, just kind of an impulse thing. ill try the taping idea. i didnt really notice about the shrinking until u pointed it out, but now i see it pretty clearly. the letters are kinda plain, but thats mostly my level, i can sometimes pull off nicer things, but not with all letters. ill try something more complex tho. as for the "shoot" off the M, i did it at the end, to try to counter the extention on the last A. ill try pinching the M a bit more too. so later tonight ill try to put up another attempt thats more "dynamic. thanks so much. peace. ps. ill try to pull the letters closer together 2, but i have trouble with that sometimes.
Rek- You know who would be a good battle match up for you (it wouldn't be a toy battle, so Koper could host and poll it). You Vs. my DOA crew mate Wrek10. That would be a fresh battle. h34r:
i asked him a few months ago since we write pretty close to the same word (if its the same person ...) and he said it takes him a long time to produce a skecth yada yada yada . .. . . dont worry i have a friendly battle set up with some one who is going to rip me into 2 . . . . .
word, wrek knows his stiff, and you guys almost have the same style....well, not really, but id like to see that