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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. DubSack

    DubSack Member

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    ai51.photobucket.com_albums_f375_AJsweet_cbbc7dcd.jpg

    feedback is appreciated
     
  2. magic nyc

    magic nyc Elite Member

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    Hard to read, but its nice.
     
  3. []RENT[]

    []RENT[] Senior Member

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    define your letters more and do some simpler stuff, get rid of all those arrows and extra lines coming off, Dont have any add ons for now. keep it simple, and work on your letter structure alot.

    WolfBurrns, wildstyle is having all the letters connected, with alot of style, semi wild style is the next closest thing, which is like wildstyle just simpler. What you have are simples, a step up from block and bubble letters. Theres millions of spots inbetween that and even semi wildstyle.

    "You dont go to wildstyle, wildstyle comes to you"
     
  4. BoRe-719-

    BoRe-719- Elite Member

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    i cant find anything wrong with it....looks wall worthy to me
     
  5. MOOSE-1

    MOOSE-1 Senior Member

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    That pic is tight. Nothing wrong with it really, looks better than a lot of things in these toy threads.
     
  6. []RENT[]

    []RENT[] Senior Member

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    you guys need to look at the letter structure, you just look at all the fancy add ons, all those lines going everyway makes it worse, the D looks like a B, the U could be hundreds of things and the B looks like a P with some wierd arrows, If you have arrows make it part of letter itself, not just flying off the side
     
  7. *slinky*

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    i think its nice.. i like the colors
     
  8. beone

    beone Elite Member

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    mind telling s what it says? i think i see a cun?

    colors are whack and so are the drips
     
  9. MOOSE-1

    MOOSE-1 Senior Member

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    Shit looks tite to me, don't know what the fuk it says or if u can put this up on a wall but yeah.
     
  10. "-STRAY?-"

    "-STRAY?-" Senior Member

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    kinda looks like it says buik lol...i like the style you just needa work on your letter structure a little more...try doing sumthing a little more basic you know. nice color choice tho i like it...its a very good peice for the toy black book.
     
  11. myl

    myl Elite Member

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    personally, i wouldve probably posted that in the regular blackbooks...thats pretty nice
     
  12. uhhh

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    well it looks nice. then when you try and find letters you have a problem. if i could find at least on letter that had good structure i'd say get the fuck out of the toy thread. but since not. define your letters some more.
     
  13. NAD_sat

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    ai65.photobucket.com_albums_h214_get_up_P1100059.jpg

    new throw, any comments?
     
  14. sky 5

    sky 5 Elite Member

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    dub sak - yeah man, you might wanna try givin your letters a lil more TLC, it looks like you focused on repeating attractive angles and extensions/shootoffs but left the letters behind . . . .

    to the guy above thats a clean, nice but very standard thorw . . .. i like it
     
  15. sky 5

    sky 5 Elite Member

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    nad sat - im being picky but get the top left shadow for the S to end pointy like the actual letter does . . .simples need precision
     
  16. ShIfTeD

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  17. DubSack

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    thanks for all the feedback guys. ill have a new drawing up for yall to critique soon.

    btw it says Gold..ill work on making the letters more clear next time.
     
  18. NAD_sat

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    yeah i know, im not gonna be throwing up a sharp letter with a rounded shadow, this was just a quick marker to paper example. and it's obviously going to be kind of simple because it's a throw, i'm not going out there with a wildstyle throw.
     
  19. []RENT[]

    []RENT[] Senior Member

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    I thought it said dub.. you really needa work on defining your letters :lol:
     
  20. HazeAmaze

    HazeAmaze Senior Member

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    View attachment 213318


    i colored too lightly, so the scanner fucked that up...

    comments, criticism?

    (and at which point are you not considered toy?)