the rest of the criticism should be self explanitory....

-3d shouldn't overlap letters means - 3d shouldn't overlap letters.
-lose the arrows means - lose the arrows.
-your piece sucks means your piece sucks...

get where I'm goin with this. But I'll sort out a "what is letter structure" post for you tomoz.

 

Shurrup...i knew that :unsure:
Yea thanks man

 

thanks for the feedback guys. keep it comin.

Here are some character ideas i been kicking around, i just wanted criticism before i touch em up or put them in a piece or whatever.

 

you have really nice characters... but I'm not likin your pieces...


But seriously nice characters.

 

Really nice them chars and do you like scaring the shit outta me?? lol they are creepy more more more.....(not sexually related :lol: )

 

ahaahah i never get tired of this.


everytime a chick joins bs, its like some crazy e party for her [/b][/quote]
It aint like that man.
I just harassed and then she critted my shit.
Then I felt like an asshole
<_<

 

i appreciate the feedback. I tend to make my characters evilish although i can make them good-ish if i wanted. I just like the evil look more. Its probably pretty apparent, but ive had a lifetime of experience drawing characters as compared to drawing pieces, which ive only had a few months experience. anyway, ill get up some more characters and pieces later.

 

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Fast Sketch, I'll probly fix it up and tighten the letters in, but crits please

The sketch is done really lightly I had to play with contrast in photoshop to be able to see pencil lines so I know the lines arent the same thickness.

Thanks Everyone

 

make all the letters the same size and keep them at the same angle

 

do all letters need to be on same angle, first time ive heard that

 

and stop tracing the coca cola symbol

 

i didnt trace coca cola symbol, i drew it lol

 

tell me if these letter styles are worth working on...

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this is the toy forum i like those sketches they good=)

 

ur 2nd sketch is far better than your first one bowser, keep working on it

 

Dubsack... you characters are reaaaaaly nice, you've got some talent.

But your pieces are actually horrible, Go to block letters, loose the wildstyle, and forget about arrows for now. That's where you'll progress from.

Keep sketchin though, because: nice pieces + your karaks = a beautiful piece

 

Is that her in her sig? It looks like a guy wearing lipstick.. :huh: [/b][/quote]
meh, whatever, just a bunch of e-talk, doesn't bother me.

Dubsack, ur characters are mad sick. Ur pieces are cool, did u start doing the arrows when u first started doing pieces? Or did u try wildstyle then start adding to it?

 

yeah nice1 4 the attitude

 

forgot this one too heehee...