Im feelin that alot. But i'd lose the green shit. Looks kinda random to me. Maybe next time give it a pattern or something along the lines of waves.

 

i dont hav my camra but when i can i will

 

I know this is blackbook thread, but whatever.

Uh so this is my first canvas. Im happy with everything exept the S. It turned out REALLY ugly in my opinion.


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Any non idiotic comments appreciated.

EDIT: cropped

 

Go back to blocks bowser, sorry man but your 3D is well out and i mean really out. And dont connect all your letters up with 3D yet youv'e seriously got confused.
Change all that.
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And the other piece sucks sorry man but you haven't progresses enough to do style like that yet.

 

Another sketch!

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thts pretty fly y dnt u just write hex? the a jus seems 2 b there 4 i dno a random reason hex.one hexer.one etc or jus inlarge the a n make it feel wanted....its lonely :lol:

 

i would have liked it more if the E on the hexa overlapped the h but looks tight

 

im feelin it although the a is lacking in size ....

 

any critz

 

vel?
the letters dont really flow, and im not a fan of pointy square type shit sooo just keep at it

 

Haha, yeah, I know the A got screwed up... I was gonna fix it but I noticed it after I added the 3d and everything... Next sketch, I'll do somethin about it

 

somthing i did like a week back...


critz would be greatly appreciated

 

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newish sketch i was told it looked like i bit off of graffiti creator i need another opinion
crits...?




AceONE - take out those bubbles and those triangle add ons on top of the letters some of the 3d is a little off also

 

*EDIT*

 

Dont No if u can see it but i cant darken the image srry

 

Sorry mate but thats just ugly go back to blocks, you can't even see what its sez!

 

yea i no but theres to E's so its hard to make them both work i wasnt really feelin the r

 

Still nothin?? critz plz

 

WAt should i colour it it might look better (but i dont no wat to colour it with)