purple tag is best, lose the arrow into the c tho

 

i like the black tag

For The Throwie - i'd work on your letter structure and fix the c and r cuz theyre too plain and they just stick out

 

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for band battle

 

character is sickkkkkk. plain and simple.
the letters are good not really fellin the colors tho

 

Holidaay,
the dry sketch looks better than the finished product. Think about incorporating the letters into one another more than simple overlaps; make the word a cohesive image rather than individual letters, y'know.
Try to ease up on all the nooks and crannies, too.

 

yeah i know exactly what u mean... thanks

 

Yessir...

Now any comments on my two (Bubbles and bunny)?

 

Well, anyone?

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Again, the S is ugly, but Im happy with the rest. Your comments?

 

bunny is realll sick and the bubble letters and pretty good and unique since u dont like them i guess

 

not even kidin... my prismas where driing out... so i made it look like a multi colored terd... <_<

 

once again, CRITS please....
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once again.... black tag is the best i think

as far as the throwies... id work on the letter structure and change the c and r because theyre too plain

 

hmmm..... "Neer1" eh... pretty sure ive been around these parts longer than you chief

 

stop bumping your work

people already gave you crits, thers no need to bump especially when its on the last page

 

edit

 

sweet fuck thats hot!

 

one more criticizm... exagerate the bubble letters more and do them in one solid line. i mean, keep it as fluid as you can. peace

 

do u spell it Neer r Near

 

please dont ignore my comments
i sed theres missin 3D on the Z
(krazzie ammo)