STOP POSTING THAT! youve posted that to many times, and yet everyone gives you crits make somthing new, and stop reposting that for crits
yeh, go simple you should start off with doing just simple straight letters and then build on that and develop a style andconsistancy... the letters should be the same thickness all round and lose those detatchments (middle of the s, top of the e, bottom of the e, etc etc.) and the highlights or whatever theyre supposed to be are off.
i've only posted it twice and the first time you said you couldnt see it then the second no one gave me any advice so i thought maybe i'd get some feedback this time but uhh yeah
That shits always hot MF. Not much too crit except the tag's a little wack, but I'd trade a good tag for those letters anyday. Are you gonna hook up that thread or what? I'll name my first born Yaser....
Yo, I've been trying out new things with my letters like connecting them and stuff. And I wanted to make like the whole piece as one instead of overlapping letters and here's what I came up with... I was gonna ink it heavily like I used to (like Askew's sketches) View attachment 214924 I love bits haha
I still can't come up with a decent E ;/ [Broken External Image]:http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/5713/blah013mediumij9.jpg
Do whatever you feel. Whatever you want to teach, or whatever you want cats to learn. Preferably a pic tutorial with flicks at different stages of progression or whatever. And thank you! I'm looking forward to seeing your presentation. I know it will be ill.
Some more shit, please crit ;/ [Broken External Image]:http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/4966/blah014mediumqw1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/9971/blah015mediumpd4.jpg
Sleet- I'm gonna be brutally honest with you homeboy. You should probably draw more and post less. The reason I say that is because I've seen you post this throwie almost identically over and over again and there hasn't been much progression to it, nor does it have much to critique. It's basic, but you'd probably be better off going even more basic, because it just looks sloppy and it doesn't look like you're familiar with your letters yet. You haven't really pulled any flair out of them. I'd probably work on blocks for a while, or at least something other than that throwie, cuzz it just ain't workin. On the bright side tho, your tag is coming along! sky5- That's beautiful.