its supposed to have that effect but i dont always do them

 

yeah leaks nice job...im feelin the z the most idk why but keep it up...

 

yeah i think its sick dont get me wrong and i like the effect. but on the other i think they take from the a and e

 

i think it looks nice.
did you go over yourself?

 

yeah i usualy do the point at the top right of the a i was a lil drunk so i messed it up.

 

yeah i usualy do the point at the top right of the a i was a lil drunk so i messed it up. [/b][/quote]
yo i so know how that is.
ever do a bomb or something and think is the shit
come back the next day its horrible.

 

^Replace 'woman' with bomb.

Sentence stays true.

 

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im done with this shit this site suckss pace pm me ur number

 

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me and feedletter painted. give me some feed back i did the red one

 

1st piece ...

i know its not clean...

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comments/crits please

peace

 

damn jaze im likin that throw alot....im feelin yasers but not the other guys that much...and acek you need to clean up your outlines...they are wobbly and vary(sp) in thickness in somplaces...

 

It isn't horrible, although I'm usually not a fan of two-tone fills and this colour combo doesn't do it for me.

However, the letters are clean (for the most part- I don't like the lines in the 'd' cutting it in half) but the arrows are total bollocks- inconsistent width and look forced.


Do you write Dask or Dash? The last letter could easily be either.


Nice final outline.

keep up.

 

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thats awesome man lovin the colours

 

thanks for the crits rats

others crits or comments please?

 

so far this is my fourth piece tell em what yal think

 

go simpler

 

thanks for the crits rats

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beside the facts its a total fucking bite!!!! get off the next mans dick!!!!! :angry: <_<

 

way simpler, too much going on, wack extensions and no consistency.

maybe try sketching throw ups or just simples and block letters, hope that helps.