Dont just throw arrows out in all directions. It looks a lot better if you feel the angles with the angles of the letters. Also try to keep all the arrow heads the same size unless your trying a far away/close-up effect. Also dont try to do arrows. You got the first letter, bottom arrow on the right angle, just too long. Also dont overlap the arrows. Arrows only come when its a last resort to the tip of your extension, otherwise it just looks tacky. Thats my 2 cents on arrows. NICCSACC that is fuckin ill. The YASER above your little throw needs some work is structure i think (maybe just the s, e and r). The one above that is on the money though. Those Karate sketches are fucking dope, got some real style flowin there. The ensoe sketch needs work on the drips, they should be on the left because of the slant of the word. Make them alot smaller too, i think someone already said that. Im not really feeling that 3D effect. I can see where you tried to fix it up too.
[Broken External Image]:http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/1644/image022rh4.jpg Did this for a chick, it says NAT if you can't read it. [Broken External Image]:http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/7627/image007de8.jpg Some random shit, not overly happy with it. Crits anyway Cheers
im lovin that stuff sky 5 and yaser; sekz i dont like the first one, but the second one is nice crits please.... View attachment 217463
new sketch, uncoloured, experimentnig with add ons.. should i keep the add ons or get rid of them? [Broken External Image]:http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/7484/kosr5ih1.png some crits would be nice too.
thats hell complex... a little two comple for my likings. maybe a clearer picture would help make it out more but as always you can really help it (i know how it feels having a Digi cam that came from the buttocks of a bufalo)
on the right track no doubt. never overlap the previous letter with the next one. (example: the T overlapping the U) anywwayy, from here just bend up some shit, fuck with it, give it some fuckin funk. yadidimeannnn?
did niccsacc jus get credit for my sketch? meh whatever niccsaac those karate are pretty dope what do you do oyur fills with?
Yo could someone help me out with this peice in on da bottom [Broken External Image]:http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/1928/asenpg0.jpg
NICCSACC that 'life suks' shit is ill man. im lovin it. the skull, and the drip really add to the effect. keep it up Sky, that is fckin sik bro. I love it. and i agree with whoever said youre an inspiration to us all here in the toy box. lol. Keep it up. and kosr, if you could get a cleaner pic, id like to see it. Sekz, 1st one is tight. keep it up.
View attachment 217561 Tell me how shit this is hahaha Yeah it sucks, just getting inspiration from these forums hahaha i'm not that good
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did niccsacc jus get credit for my sketch? meh whatever niccsaac those karate are pretty dope what do you do oyur fills with? [/b][/quote] crayon yeah im low budget