id work on the structure of the letters before the fills. do more simples thats the bottom line. forget about colors for the time being mabye just fuck with forcefeilds or 1 color fills.
[Broken External Image]:http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/7181/untitledhatkm9.th.png here is a quick sketch i did like a month ago, its not coloured or anything but its the only thing i have on my computer, Shift wants me to post something :angry: so here it is.
work on ur letter structure and ur fills. if u clean it up a bit and make it a bit more organized that shitll be reel tight
haha, exactly what i was thinking. So basically hes saying out of that one letter, the structure and fills are bad....but besides that its fire!!!!
youre on the right track. forget about the fill and concentrate on the form of the letter. make it perfect then move on to a fill or whatever.
basically...jus didnt feel like bein a dick...well at leats not straightfoward about it anyways h34r:
whats the point criticizing it then? you gotta be brutally honest. these cats are asking for it if they cry about something you say, fuck em. they shouldnt have asked for crits in that case.
aight i feel u...speakin of brutally honest crit this piece of shit i just did...w/e i just colored it wit some dry erase markers [Broken External Image]:http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/9024/1022243723265615410vd2.jpg
i think you already know its not very good. S and CSM is very fat and the rest is all skinny. Keep working on the simples and you will get it.
which one do u think has the most potentiol? [/b][/quote] the top one on the bottom pic, just keep working at it, sketch it a million times, just the simple letters, then start morphing them a bit, try a million different things with each letter, your bound to find something that works.
ya fer sure wat u think bout the csm letter style tho, i mean its simple n all but doest it flow at all?
OK, what do you think of this one? better than my last one? i like this one better... crits? View attachment 218348