for the toy battle...needa fix some small things but what u think of it overall

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shifty don't have the top of the s leaning into the other letters like that, unless your gonna lean the other letters as well, cause it looks wierd.

sry i edited this post before i saw yours aces and said pretty much the exact same thing :lol:

 

Each letter seems to have a different style of it's own. The P has that thing on the left of it, the H is just straight up block buster style, the E looks like a widened tag, the R has that thing at the bottom of it, and the Z looks like a next step up from blockbusters. Ahh they all suck except the H and the P if you didn't have that shit off too the left of it.


Yea I saw that when I finished editing the quote into this one. Haha!

 

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an y that i thought could be cool with practice. I know its sloppy but with somme work and efort i think it could be cool. whta do u guys think?? anywyas crits an recommandations are strongly welcomme...

 

An Y??? Haha nice grammar...just kidding. I don't know about the whole sketching one letter at a time but whatever. It's ok for a simple but as you said quite sloppy. So rework it and take your time on it. Don't rush it.

 

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a new throw that i randomly decided to color

crits please

 

thr will br good if instead of making the top like a U make i like a V and keep the back of the V traight... get it maybe.

 

does that say MINO? or MINP?

 

u think? k i might try that

 

try it if not change it

 

n:craze, the i and n are perfect, the m and o need work. make them more square, to fit the style of the i and the n.

 

yeah the i&n are pretty dope

 

yeah its mino and iv been foolin with it more with a regular o it looks dope and a boxyer m

 

thats excatly what i be doin with letters .....bend em one way in a sketch . .. bend em the other way in a sketch . .. bend em a thrid way in a sketch .. .. then see what works and what dont . . .. you got the proportion down pat which is a huge first step (just drawing bars seems to be a tough step for soem people) .. well on your way homie!

 

pace throwie new^^

 

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first go at the rectangle thingy... looks shit at the mo, cn see how this shit works tho so hopefully will cum good at the the end of a few weeks

 

pace work on that e, separate the top bit from the bottom bit (if that makes sense) like how a normal e looks like

 

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i was lookiing back and found this
Meetermaid, i love that bottom M so much.
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