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bump for critz once again

 

hot as always regs

 

bump for some crits? [/b][/quote]
uhh the H is really hard to see I find...some of the letters are pretty un-structured. in particular the H and the Z, although i get the feeling this is what you were going for, id go with something more legible. I like your P though

 

thanks for the crits beke, but there is no Z

 

LOL wow then the S my bad i just had a hard time reading that one I do like your vanishing point though


**oh yea..whats that random t in a rectangle thing????***

 

hope u dont mind, bump. do u think a clean version of it would make it to tip-top? just curious, be honest, (as if u wouldnt) thanks.


peace.

 

the e and the r are kinda wierd, i don't know what it is about them but they just kinda bug me. the p h and z are all good though. i remember when you had the grodiest letters. cheers, good progress.

 

tricksforkids - thats fin dope man . . . the vertical line of the P could be alil smaller to amtch the rest . . . the all red is dope color choice but running a thin black forcefield outline on the letters might look even better against the red lined 3d . . .

 

i find the e doesnt go with the rest of the sketch..it looks too round and out of place compared to the other letters, but im feelin the rest of the sketch

 

somebody dropped a link for that one a 5 or 6 more in toy story. just go back a few pages

 

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somebody dropped a link for that one a 5 or 6 more in toy story. just go back a few pages [/b][/quote]
It was me. Have a look through my posts, I can't remember the link off by heart.

 

ok thanks

 

this piece is a work in progress...just SE for now...F's are kinda tricky to pull off nicely

crits comments and suggestions are very appreciated

 

that's too cluttered try making the extension smaller than the letter structure maybe

 

MYL, feels very sky but its good

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thanks guys....i def see what you mean about being cluttered

and magic...is it like im biting? cause i def dont wanna bite on people especially sky

 

i don't know about him. but to me it just feels kinda like sky's stuff. not biting just same feel to it. get it? :huh:

 

I don like all the arrows man



any crits b4 i try paintin this?

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