nice mabye add more flair to your letters and bunch them up a little tighter together ya dig. other than that its clean as hell guy!
thanks yo. was tryin to get the oldschool feel to it by keepin it pretty simple. im not sure if i achieved that or not. but whatever. not too happy with it overall.
yeah. the heart attachment on the "I" is a classic. just make the letters a little thicker basically. squeeze them together more thats about it other than that its fresh.
an clean up on your shadow or 3d its off in some places [Broken External Image]:http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1738.jpg
[Broken External Image]:http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/2711/img6994wi0.jpg crits redid an outline i posted earlier
mino? go keep your letters all the same width for now and dont make the letters like chopped up how they are in fragments
yeah im tryin to help..im gettin real tired i just reread what i posted and i put "go keep" i dont even know why...it doesnt make sense to me im out goodnight all
yeah MF has a real nice flow b/c he repeats certain lines/angles/movements that look good . . .look at the top right lop of the P, e, R there all the same which gives you that consistent the-man-knows-what-hes-doin style . . . what works for one letter should work for other letters of similar structure . . . . .z z z z z z z
i agree with you on the width bit, but disagree on the fragmented bit...the appeal of those letters IS the fact that they're all like chopped up. (i just really like that style so i suppose i'm biased, whatever..) but otherwise mino the colours look real nice, and i like the brown inverse-highlights.
crits? i like this one better than the other one i was working on, its sort of a new addon i addes to it kinda. what do u think? its a bit messy, if i did it proper the letters wud be cleaned up, but do u think with cleaner letters this wud be better than my other thro? View attachment 219989
crits? i like this one better than the other one i was working on, its sort of a new addon i addes to it kinda. what do u think? its a bit messy, if i did it proper the letters wud be cleaned up, but do u think with cleaner letters this wud be better than my other thro? View attachment 219990
the style is lookin nice, but itd be nice to see a cleaner one sumtime, remember that each middle lione of the h's and the t's shud end at the same point
[Broken External Image]:http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/7130/1040246303326195500fo9.jpg that p[roportion thing i was jus tlakin bout is easier said than done...for instance the c doesnt extend far up enough on the vertical extension thing, w.e...i fucked up wit the coloring crits?
mebone i rekon you could work on your letter structure a little before you waist time using markers or paint or pencil and your fill. maybe use addons and your letters dont need to be so thin and yeh basically its alright just work on your letters
thnx...yah the markers r those gay ass ones that smell like stuff. im drunk and sotle them from some first graders
[Broken External Image]:http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/82/bandwqv1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/5056/crazyyyyrt9.jpg im so sorry about the size! any crits?