I like it, I'd just move the left side of the "V" up to match the rest.

Crits on mine above anyone?

 

hey bro, 1. take all ur bumpy shit off your letters and keep them straight for now...
2. work on each letter one at a time bu keet it really really simple...
3.dont worry on color rite now keep it at your letters....
4.dont put n e arrows or extentions on your letters..

workon those things for a while...yul get ther eventually.

 

Bumpy shit? Like the sides of the "O"?

 

yea like the crakaly lookin shit, just keep everything smooth n simple

 

NIC keep at it, keep ur letters all the same size...ur startin off good thoe, nice

 

my first bomb i came up with and a doom character, tell me your sugestions

 

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dude take it easy...simples.

 

hahaha go easy bro

 

cool little mfdoom thing. too bad mfdooms music is wack. like the mask a little bit tho. pz

 

I'm hell toy but I know you should learn basic letter structure before you try wildstyle pieces.

 

the letters aka "peice" is horrid but the bart is great.

 

haha right now im writing "Cear"


thanks, ill have urs soon




peace.

 

Working on simples like everyone suggests.

I can see the 'S' needs some work. And excuse my terrible pen control. I'm getting a cold.

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So yeah, crits?

 

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my chrome pen is disgusting

 

im doin the same thing, that looks good, now u just gotta start tweakin it!

some throws im workin on crits???

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make ur t's in the first one match up better

 

The middle bar of the 'E' should be shorter cuz now it looks stupid, otherwise its good