[Broken External Image]:http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e67/only1fancypants/Picture2004.jpg Hmm ... Critiques?
[Broken External Image]:http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/7349/blackbook006qc9.jpg I liked the seven sins battle idea so I decided to do one.......... last page in my first book so off to jack a book tommorow. Crits?
Ape: I like it alot. Maybe make the E longer. Arma: IDK maybe have the last a overlap instead of under lap, the M being over it really messes with how the A looks. My 2 cents
hottttttt nice work and yea ....that black box is wack and ape...that shit is awesome i wish i could do shit like that
hey ape, that is looking hottt!!! but one thing...try and make the E more definative....i couldn't really tell what it was but the first two letters are the shizz
yo ape thats hot! not shure if i like the black fill things but its all good. Heres a 9/11 thing i did, i still only have a camera phone but what ever [Broken External Image]:http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/5093/0912061321atf3.jpg
not to bad dude some of them need some work but overall your style isnt to shabby.... i would work on the 3d and the color scemes
well neva got many comments on ma shit few pages back but owel, mostlyt old shit anyway.. but heres a new style av bin workin on, wat ya think, anything i should change or that? [Broken External Image]:http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/paulman21/img111.jpg
This is VERY nice. It makes me a bit suspicious tho. Got any other work you could show? I like the fill, but the letters are EXTREMELY quality. How long have you been writing?
[Broken External Image]:http://img476.imageshack.us/img476/6919/dsc0489qr4.jpg i'm still toy only eriting a little while, crits?
change the colors take the yellow and green out and add a more earth tones to match the red and orange....... over all not to bad but the colors hurt my head...