just did thnx im just keeping it num





quik 3-d................. i also gotta work on my 3-d

 

uhh. loose the 3d try a very small shadow.
it looked so much better before the 3d.

 

DNK: your lines look very shaky.. move your hand faster maybe

 

ok so i was bored today and did this drawing just something simple. and there is also a cleaner copy of what i entered in the toy battle

 

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yeah i know. I'm not a good writer but I tried. Crits good and bad would be nice so i can fix some things and get ideas.

 

I didn't do a fill cause i didn't want to mess anything up

 

dude does that say mayo? hahahahahaha

 

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Just did this. Crits please

 

yeah man, looks fresh, nice fill

playing with perspective and stuff:

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I don't know I like all the letters but the R.

 

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il post up more tomorrow but heres a couple sketches crits?

 

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this is money.
make all the letters have the same height.

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Any other crits other than this

 

Levans, bad color choice on the first one.

 

try having different sized bubbles on the third

 

BUMP

 

the letters saying " remember the name" look well good!
your handstyle looks decent aswell, im not feeling the pieces that much
although the bottom one is a million times better than the first

 

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Still no crits? And cero I'm lovin that PHSYK sketch.

 

aces -you got the proportion down ...you def improving sketch by skecth ... i would fix the S up by having the middle slant bar extended farther out to the right and then have the bottom bar of the S come up a lil shorter than the middle bar . . .if that makes sense . . in other words instead of having the bottom bar be the fartherest east make it the middle bar . . . move the P up a lil and slightly more into the H so it lays even with the rest of the letters and takes up some open space above the H . .