[Broken External Image]:http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/2714/bsbattle1oa6.jpg what do you guys think? this was for the BS toy battle
dont liek 3d on the bootom one and dont really liek the monky or mabey it jus doesnt fit it with that little message of showing your heart
[/b][/quote] keep it more simple. look at aperok, its simple, but it still looks good, keep w/ block letters.
[Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/teslasketch.jpg you guys probably wont like this, but im asking for crits anyways. i drew it in chem class
bump for just a few more crits [/b][/quote] i love these letters, im not feeling the 3d though. its extended too far out for my liking
[Broken External Image]:http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/897/teslasketchnx2.jpg work on ur letter structure some more. keep sketching
hahaha shit, i never even saw the nazi thing when i was drawing it suppose i should change it up then good crits though, thanks
i think this is the most simple piece i have done so far[Broken External Image]:http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k97/_lacrimosa/Ritual.jpg the bubbles in the black and on the ouside are spose ta be yellow but the scanner dident pick it up.
bump any suggestions? [/b][/quote] already told ya.... ok bud im not tryin to be a tool, but why the fuk do ppl never listen to STAY SIMPLE. 3D's off, god only knows what the fuck it says?? try a simple piece n show me wat that looks like....
the "O" lookin like a sphincter. add a little squirt and youre golden bear. [/b][/quote] bahha this is amazing.
the only letter i can even vaguely make out is the a. draw blockletters until you learn letter structure bud my best guess is that is says punal