he's a guy from korea i met online. he is the one who drew my avatar. i like the name (its obvously not his real name, tho)

 

haha, its just odd

 

bump before i sleep

 

bump before i sleep [/b][/quote]
that first one is ill, im not feeling the second one though. misproportioned like you said, and the letters are too skinny for me

just finished up this one, any have crits pls?
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Crits please. Need improvement!

 

why the fuck do u guys quote a whole bunch of pictures that would be right above ur post?
fix ur z and write it a shit load of times till it looks good

 

Seek139- work on that letter structure more i dont liek the random edges that come off everywhere. and if thats an N then it is to hidden

Necro- the first one i dont liek...i dono why...mabey just give er a fill and see what it looks liek

second one like the fill but the random parts shooting everywhere dont really go with it..letters are decent they could be thicker in my opinion handstyle needs work an by god im sorry but thats a really ugly outline

Toxik- you need to smooth out your lines and put more flow into that throw also 3d or a drop shadow would make it look better





bummping for crits

 

yarharhar, i love the bottom one, those greens are sick, do you use prismas?

i dont like the top one as much, but its still nice

 

yeah harhar i was just messing around in school... i can get hot simple's i'm trying to add something more i guess it aint working...but i'm back to the drawing board i'll post up l8r

 

missed novella


really digging that e..but the begining and end need work your t is kind of lacking and i dont liek the extensions coming off of the a and t...they could look good if you fixed them though...overdone on the extensions lose some of those (especail the l to a connection)


i better get some fuckin crits now

 

i use letraset...there like primas..but three tips instead of 2..(i dono if prisma makes a 3 tip)

 

thanks, those are some good crits

the y in your bottom one is super sick btw, the only thing i dont like about the bottom peice is the fill on the 5, just seems kind of plain i guess

 

Aye NOMX, that isn't a Z its a 2 sorry if it looks bad. Thanks for crits Yar and NOMX though. I'll be working on it.

 

Tesla/Novella: thats looking a whole bunch better
Yar: lovin the bottom one, need to get myself markers and stop using random highlighters

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comments?

 

bartic: i love that S, it looks killer. id try and space out the letter a bit more though

oh, and theres some 3D missing on the K, no biggie though


edit**

i changed up that sketch a bit, heres the newer version :



better?

 

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Drew in art... Yeah yeah I know, lose the heart.

I want some constructive crits, I'm trying to get better.

 

venom: youre on the right track for sure, just keep sketching lots and lots, you have a good idea of how to build letters so far. I know its only a pencil sketch, but try to work on keeping your lines straighter / cleaner.

The D and the R are good, try to work on that N thoughh

 

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just a quicky

 

Bumping for more crits. Dope S Bartic