like this?

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yo any1 got crits on this?

 

nah, those look too much like dr seuss drew up some piles of shit


dont stack them like that. try drawing a big circle in pencil, then put two smaller ones on either side of it, slightly overlapping. simplest form of bubbles you can get. dont forget to erase the overlapping lines though

use this, then play around with it a bit

 

it looks pretty good to me. add a character to that or sumthing

 

Crits? Trying to break out of the usual shit.
I really don't blackbook that much since I'm mostly a poster guy, but I feel like I'm cheating myself if I don't try at it..
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doesnt look too bad, i would make the Z a bit bigger though, and take off that arrow extension thats on the bottom left of the R

 

i just dont like how your letters are so thin cezr

 

Man i say go a bit simpler, you really havent got the structure down yet. I would have thought you were better than that, i saw u dissing a kid on the toy bombs peices thread that wasnt much morse than this. No offence but dont throw stones in a glass house.

 

I always do my bubbles like this :
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Dont have a camera so I did it quick in paint.
You just draw a lot of different-sized circles, and and then make the outline.

 

MEH. Bubbles are so simple, theres not even a real technique to it.

 

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likin that style, clean, dope coulor scheme

 

ye sumoe,looks cool
with a bit of practice that style could look well good
and bubbles are the easiest thing in the world

 

yeah i liek this. Dont put arrows on the ends of ur letters though. eg the S. work on connecting all the letters, not just some. overall structure needs some work, particularly the e and u.

 

im pretty shitty at bubbles too it like everything else practice makes perfect

 

thnx for crits, yea i been tryin to work on structure...

 

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Tryin to keep shit simple... feedback? Am i doin shit wrong? Quit graff?

Sorry about the pic quality..my camera's a bitch.

 

if ur askin kids on the ionternet hu u have never met most probabky bull shit if u shud quit graff

u fuckin should

if u havnt got ne commitment then quit theres no point

 

dont quit... make everything porportioned the s is alrite.. ther rest needs alot of work.. copy the letters from the key board, fatten em up a little bit, keep doin till ya get perfect at em, then add one or two extensions.. go from there