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Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by fame, Nov 6, 2004.

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  1. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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  2. nerdx

    nerdx Elite Member

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    i know im not up to par with you cats
    but im ganna try and spit a quick rap
    my shit aint the best belive me, i know that
    but you talkin shit like you are the best
    but really your just like all of the rest
    a dude that boasts and beats on his chest
    hell yeah you know what your sayin
    and i come here some might think im playin
    think your a hardass how you somke maryjane
    when in all reality your a toy like me
    but at least im not part of the crew-still free
    give it some time and soon you will see
    that all you wanna do is be like me.

    im trying.
     
  3. Bruce_1nR

    Bruce_1nR Senior Member

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    Fuck you wheat pastin pussys, stencil sprayin sissys,
    get with the real shit, killin all citys!

    Killin all crews, walls, freights and hoes,
    rockin rusto til the day I goes, but hold...please wait applause,
    for the fact that its true, Se4 is ya boss!

    Droppin bombs on freights, walls, holdin these balls like ya girlfriends drawz

    Killin these kids like jacko smokin wacko,
    I attack your throat and leave you without a cackle

    fuck this, I give up...

    peace
     
  4. TalibKweli

    TalibKweli Elite Member

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    Damn, only Asen and myself burnin shit up
     
  5. trac

    trac Senior Member

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  6. Bruce_1nR

    Bruce_1nR Senior Member

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    yeah bitches, 100 posts
    who got the most?

    ...that was just spam for 100 posts...congrats to trac for also achevin 100 posts....yeah buddy
     
  7. TalibKweli

    TalibKweli Elite Member

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    take your chit chat elsewhere
     
  8. nerdx

    nerdx Elite Member

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    yo whoa, can i get some feedback on my lines
     
  9. ASEN

    ASEN Banned

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    Well, you could slip in some metaphors every once in a while, a little colour never hurt anyone

    Plus all you're doin is relating to whats happening here and now, if we all did that, this thread would suck, even more so than now
    Take example, but DON'T BITE from more skilled mc's who pack a punch and a fair bit of wit too.

    Please remember that this isn't a serious thread, and petty beef is unwarranted, as well as unnecessary.
    If you need to vent, go duke it out with some homeless guy. here, we just flex words.
    (that goes to whoa and swich more than anybody else)
     
  10. nerdx

    nerdx Elite Member

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    thanks a lot yo.
     
  11. swich

    swich Elite Member

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    yeah thats true...


    a lil keystyle cuz im bored...

    i get so much titties im thinkin bout wearin a mens bra/
    my wallets so fat it look like ana nicole smith b4 trim spa/
    the ice is appealin, got these bitches mesmorized/
    so many hoes id have to have 100 gigs to get there names memorized/
    im chasin bitches down with a hack saw like we was tom and jerry/
    sometimes these hoes are liek the exorcist, now that shits scary/
    i got more white than a date with a redneck/
    no disrespect but i leave ya girls bed wet/
    when i see 5-0 ima ghost and i aint even dead yet...
     
  12. TalibKweli

    TalibKweli Elite Member

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    yah aint nobody takin this serious, i mean i got under swich's skin a lil with his girl n all but i aint hatin or anything
    freestylin live is thrillin, i love it
    here its like you drop some ill bars and nobody goes OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH or laughs, so it sucks
    whoa needs props to advance to the next level :lol: jk

    anyways keep at it
     
  13. nerdx

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    haha, not really lookin for props just some feedback.
    i got some from asen so im ganna keep workin at it.
     
  14. TalibKweli

    TalibKweli Elite Member

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    you still need some work, like asen said.....need to get a deeper vocabulary
    cause its easy to rhyme 3,4 or 5 letter words
    its hard to explain, ''keystylin'' is far from being a real sypher, i mean sometimes id be at the bus stop or wherever and i just drop bars, its nice when other's get involved, beatboxin and you just created a mini sypher
    i ve done some freestyles on live mics and it isnt has easy as i thought it would be
    all the pressure cause people are lookin at you, your opponent staring you down
    so its more stressful
    concentrate, especially when its keystylin, nobody is waiting for a reply, so you can take the time to think, rhyme in your head, punch lines, extensive bars and of course some metaphors
    you need to check out some shit from supernatural
    type it up on youtube, this guy is a pro when it comes to freestylin, no writtens, from the heart.....one of the best out there
    keep at it
    peace
     
  15. MainEvent

    MainEvent Senior Member

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    feelin the anna nicole smith line.

    i had a couple bars in my head today, so imma put em down.

    Ayo, haven't written in a while but I'll drop a little key
    My melodic lyrics induce euphoric states like THC
    Or shit gets you high strung like mass amounts of cocaine
    Cause sometimes I even blow my own mind like Kurt Cobain
    Taking mainstream shit and dicing it up with precise incisions
    I only see underground, so I guess I got tunnel vision
    Proclaiming to bomb walls, not impoverished third world nations
    Shoot that bunny between his eyes to end imperalist domination
    If you wanna see some real MCing, shoot over to Raptism.com
    This was the first of many, prefecting the science on how to bomb
     
  16. TalibKweli

    TalibKweli Elite Member

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    that was nice
    i just went to that site
    i saw the Juvenille pic
    so i got my ass out there quick
     
  17. MainEvent

    MainEvent Senior Member

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    the admins bad taste in music doesnt reflect on the general user base.
     
  18. TalibKweli

    TalibKweli Elite Member

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    but Juvenille is a fesant
    i ll check it out no doubt
     
  19. MainEvent

    MainEvent Senior Member

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    another verse i keyed up. took me a little longer, kinda hit a writers block in the middle of it.

    Striking with my Immortal Technique cause my style is unkillable
    Regaining my poetic precision with each freestyled syllable
    Skills are luster embellished, blessing mics without any doubt
    My lyrical Arsenal will gun you down in any overtime shootout
    Aerosol scorches walls like pieces from Dondi and Seen
    I'll batter you til you're black and blue like the site's color scheme
    Verbal revolutionary vocalizing my opposition via hip hop rhymes
    Cause the US has been bombing cities longer than Cope2 and JA combined
    Executive branch trying to rationalize torture to constituents
    Occupy D.C. to show them the true meaning of "Capital Punishment"
    I'm tired of cats only spitting about their guns, bling, and hoes
    Feelin like Black Rob cause I'm spittin rhymes "like Whoa!"
     
  20. nerdx

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    that was good man.
    liked both of thoes.

    somethin i was thiking of eairlyer.

    as you write your lines down, im takin a look
    your stuffs wack like readding a picture book
    when i read your shit I see lines not words
    every now and then theres a noun or verb