i know im not up to par with you cats but im ganna try and spit a quick rap my shit aint the best belive me, i know that but you talkin shit like you are the best but really your just like all of the rest a dude that boasts and beats on his chest hell yeah you know what your sayin and i come here some might think im playin think your a hardass how you somke maryjane when in all reality your a toy like me but at least im not part of the crew-still free give it some time and soon you will see that all you wanna do is be like me. im trying.
Fuck you wheat pastin pussys, stencil sprayin sissys, get with the real shit, killin all citys! Killin all crews, walls, freights and hoes, rockin rusto til the day I goes, but hold...please wait applause, for the fact that its true, Se4 is ya boss! Droppin bombs on freights, walls, holdin these balls like ya girlfriends drawz Killin these kids like jacko smokin wacko, I attack your throat and leave you without a cackle fuck this, I give up... peace
yeah bitches, 100 posts who got the most? ...that was just spam for 100 posts...congrats to trac for also achevin 100 posts....yeah buddy
Well, you could slip in some metaphors every once in a while, a little colour never hurt anyone Plus all you're doin is relating to whats happening here and now, if we all did that, this thread would suck, even more so than now Take example, but DON'T BITE from more skilled mc's who pack a punch and a fair bit of wit too. Please remember that this isn't a serious thread, and petty beef is unwarranted, as well as unnecessary. If you need to vent, go duke it out with some homeless guy. here, we just flex words. (that goes to whoa and swich more than anybody else)
yeah thats true... a lil keystyle cuz im bored... i get so much titties im thinkin bout wearin a mens bra/ my wallets so fat it look like ana nicole smith b4 trim spa/ the ice is appealin, got these bitches mesmorized/ so many hoes id have to have 100 gigs to get there names memorized/ im chasin bitches down with a hack saw like we was tom and jerry/ sometimes these hoes are liek the exorcist, now that shits scary/ i got more white than a date with a redneck/ no disrespect but i leave ya girls bed wet/ when i see 5-0 ima ghost and i aint even dead yet...
yah aint nobody takin this serious, i mean i got under swich's skin a lil with his girl n all but i aint hatin or anything freestylin live is thrillin, i love it here its like you drop some ill bars and nobody goes OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH or laughs, so it sucks whoa needs props to advance to the next level :lol: jk anyways keep at it
haha, not really lookin for props just some feedback. i got some from asen so im ganna keep workin at it.
you still need some work, like asen said.....need to get a deeper vocabulary cause its easy to rhyme 3,4 or 5 letter words its hard to explain, ''keystylin'' is far from being a real sypher, i mean sometimes id be at the bus stop or wherever and i just drop bars, its nice when other's get involved, beatboxin and you just created a mini sypher i ve done some freestyles on live mics and it isnt has easy as i thought it would be all the pressure cause people are lookin at you, your opponent staring you down so its more stressful concentrate, especially when its keystylin, nobody is waiting for a reply, so you can take the time to think, rhyme in your head, punch lines, extensive bars and of course some metaphors you need to check out some shit from supernatural type it up on youtube, this guy is a pro when it comes to freestylin, no writtens, from the heart.....one of the best out there keep at it peace
feelin the anna nicole smith line. i had a couple bars in my head today, so imma put em down. Ayo, haven't written in a while but I'll drop a little key My melodic lyrics induce euphoric states like THC Or shit gets you high strung like mass amounts of cocaine Cause sometimes I even blow my own mind like Kurt Cobain Taking mainstream shit and dicing it up with precise incisions I only see underground, so I guess I got tunnel vision Proclaiming to bomb walls, not impoverished third world nations Shoot that bunny between his eyes to end imperalist domination If you wanna see some real MCing, shoot over to Raptism.com This was the first of many, prefecting the science on how to bomb
another verse i keyed up. took me a little longer, kinda hit a writers block in the middle of it. Striking with my Immortal Technique cause my style is unkillable Regaining my poetic precision with each freestyled syllable Skills are luster embellished, blessing mics without any doubt My lyrical Arsenal will gun you down in any overtime shootout Aerosol scorches walls like pieces from Dondi and Seen I'll batter you til you're black and blue like the site's color scheme Verbal revolutionary vocalizing my opposition via hip hop rhymes Cause the US has been bombing cities longer than Cope2 and JA combined Executive branch trying to rationalize torture to constituents Occupy D.C. to show them the true meaning of "Capital Punishment" I'm tired of cats only spitting about their guns, bling, and hoes Feelin like Black Rob cause I'm spittin rhymes "like Whoa!"
that was good man. liked both of thoes. somethin i was thiking of eairlyer. as you write your lines down, im takin a look your stuffs wack like readding a picture book when i read your shit I see lines not words every now and then theres a noun or verb