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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. PeYGoNeR

    PeYGoNeR Senior Member

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    bump for crits
     
  2. alive

    alive Banned

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    school is here...............................................
    so notebook sketches are back in style.
    all pen freestyles, only colors i had. ummmmmm, they say POLICE, ELEMENT, PATROL, SEVENTH.
    i dont really like any of the sketches very much, the "seventh" is aiight. for those worse then me, you can see the way i constructed the letters with bars, use that.
    and everyone better then me, please do give me advice

    ai55.photobucket.com_albums_g121_coercethemasses_DSC02742.jpg
    ai55.photobucket.com_albums_g121_coercethemasses_DSC02741.jpg
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    thanks,
    peace.
     
  3. SeeOne

    SeeOne Member

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    post some of your shit up then [/b][/quote]
    Toy Story is my old account, I just left it on and ended up posting using Toy Story.

    As for my "shit" I already posted it.
     
  4. si0n

    si0n Senior Member

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    dude you've gotten so much better, only thing i can say is that the letter structure on the patrol one could use some improvement.
     
  5. Chop Logic

    Chop Logic Senior Member

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    First time using watercolors, and I dont know what the hell is going on on top of the H, I just did a quick outline to try mixing watercolors and markers. Also thats not the flash, I was trying to get the watercolors to do kind of a fade thing.

    aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v479_FluxOfPinja_apho.jpg

    Still gotta color in the smaller letters and the star, but yeah. Crits/comments?
     
  6. SeeOne

    SeeOne Member

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    ^^

    Not a fan of water colours or art with actually paint but that shit looks nice.
     
  7. aces

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  8. naomh

    naomh Member

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    ^^^^^^
    shouldn't there be som more 3D on the p, a, z, and m? It just looks to me like its missing some. You did the left side of the S, but didn't do it on any other letters. Looks good though.
     
  9. jmammo

    jmammo Member

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    I give you stuff major props just didnt like the bump on the E. You dont have to change it. you asked for comments so I gave one to you. And as for my stuff being horrible like I said before I know.

    I aint trying to start anything so just chillllll
     
  10. aces

    aces Elite Member

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    Naw. It just looks like that cuz it hasn't been colored. When you see it colored you'll see all the 3-D and it will make sence.
     
  11. furious

    furious Senior Member

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    ai42.photobucket.com_albums_e336_notvdoctor_crayon.jpg
    simple, childish, crayons, camera phone. i only like the k and u

    plus i just suck. crits?
     
  12. TricksForKids

    TricksForKids Elite Member

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    maybe no one cares what you think
    this forum sucks, you kids shouldnt be here. the only reason your still toy is because your on this forum. get a life. if you want to be good at anything you have to pracise, thats it. you dont need good pointers or false advise or anyother bullshit because you will all develope in the same borring manner. you all suck only because you spend more time talking than doodling. if you want to talk to someone talk in person, not over some gay ass internet site where noone has even seen a paint can, or at least i hope not. dont get me wronge the other forums are fine, but thats only because the people contributing to them have some experience and something to offer the community of writers on this website. you should all be doing your homework and working your community hours. and PLEASE dont ask me why im even on this forum or whatever your little combacks will be, please. i dont need this crap. [/b][/quote]
    dont tag trees.... dont come in this thread and start dissing kids...you're just as toy as half the kids here.

    Half the kids here have also painted, and painted better than you have.

    and you come on this forum for the same reason half these kids do..because you like to talk at your computer..and you dont know anyone.

    Me and sky 5 and Mf and Ase and Anzio and Cezr, and others, the guys who stop by here to give advice, could burn any of your sketches, im no king, but i like helping these guys, at least the ones that listen.

    Your style is just as generic as the next mans, but uglier, so dont say theyll all "develop" the same way either.

    Dont come in here again on your high horse...or ill slice off all its feet.
     
  13. imported_Bes_one

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  14. TricksForKids

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    dont tag trees.... dont come in this thread and start dissing kids...you're just as toy as half the kids here.

    Half the kids here have also painted, and painted better than you have.

    and you come on this forum for the same reason half these kids do..because you like to talk at your computer..and you dont know anyone.

    Me and sky 5 and Mf and Ase and Anzio and Cezr, and others, the guys who stop by here to give advice, could burn any of your sketches, im no king, but i like helping these guys, at least the ones that listen.

    Your style is just as generic as the next mans, but uglier, so dont say theyll all "develop" the same way either.

    Dont come in here again on your high horse...or ill slice off all its feet. [/b][/quote]
    bump..

    and bes one...man its just...i can tell you have some basics for colouring down, and a fairly steady hand, but get some LETTERS up in there, its just a jumbly mess

    Peace
     
  15. Slushi

    Slushi Banned

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    next person who bumps that is emo.
     
  16. myl

    myl Elite Member

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    nerdx that piece is pretty damn sick
     
  17. alive

    alive Banned

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    ai55.photobucket.com_albums_g121_coercethemasses_DSC02738.jpg
    bumppppppppppppppppppppppppppp
     
  18. minesweep

    minesweep Elite Member

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    bump because it's one of the better things in the toy forum
     
  19. Slushi

    Slushi Banned

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    your second e has no bottom and straighten out the right side of you h.
     
  20. A-chue!

    A-chue! Member

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    I think if you round off the edges an dmake the letters the same size the second has alot of potential.

    Reffering to that duki peice a few back