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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Quadratic

    Quadratic Senior Member

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  2. T_R_O_N

    T_R_O_N Senior Member

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  3. aces

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    Lose the arrow because it only appears in that one place and it looks rather out of place.
     
  4. bouncingsoul

    bouncingsoul Elite Member

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    Well he can't do it now, it's already colored and everything
     
  5. Quadratic

    Quadratic Senior Member

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    lol yea, i did that a while ago i just thought i would post it...

    yea the arrow was a little weird but whatever, the letters are decent
     
  6. PeYGoNeR

    PeYGoNeR Senior Member

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    ^^lol yoo bouncingsoul thats look pretty good same to u quadratic for next time lose the arrow like aces said other than that keep it up lol.peace
     
  7. -testify-

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  8. lost_for_evex

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    4 reasons why I don't care about your opinion -

    1. I don't live in the bronx, or paris.

    2. I've been writing aoner for over a year now, i've gotten ups with decent heads, no one cares.

    3. Hes dead... people will know i'm not him

    4. I don't know you [/b][/quote]
    wow i gave u that name a year ago?...fuck i feel like im gettin 2 old =[
     
  9. TricksForKids

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  10. DeathRow

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  11. bouncingsoul

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    I dig that shit. Except the little thing above the O, but yeah. Good stuff
     
  12. TricksForKids

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    Death its lookin colla than a polar bears toenails...but on the real..

    its looking weirdly bubbly, i cn tell you ahve letter structure down but the whole peice as a whole gives the vibe thats its like mushy, i dunno, get a couple straighter lines, and keep your widthes of small lines the same, and straight

    Peace
     
  13. Apoc

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    ai23.photobucket.com_albums_b365_Apocaloid_goodaone2.jpg

    yeah evex I think it was about a year ago... maybe a little less... I got this account in october of last year and you named me when I had like very little posts.
     
  14. TricksForKids

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    clean shit aoner, nice and simple and very good colouring, just work on the samll extensions and either tone them down a bit or extend them into STRAIGHT FIRE...anyhoo..bumping this handstyle for some crits cuz im rugged like that.

    Peace
     
  15. Apoc

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    its good but i'd say keep it straight and lose the underline or like, keep it closer or touching the bottom of the letters
     
  16. myl

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    Its alright.. you could make it a bit more dynamic..


    Im seeing too much of this "style" but eh, its style progression.

    Keep workin at it.

    ;) [/b][/quote]
    wow that was horrible advice seeone...its gonna be hard to progress from that style and get somethin good outta it...

    do straight letters nice and simple. give them letters some breathing room inbetween the extensions of the parts of the letters
     
  17. DeathRow

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    Cheers, yeah i been trying to get away from the roundish style.. but I cant seem to do it.. Meh.. gotta keep practisin :p

    thanx for the crits fellas..

    poice
     
  18. *~ANZIO~*

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    your on your way apoc.
     
  19. sky 5

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  20. NOMX

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    hot shit mang, u sketch alot. i should probably do that too........naw