Hilo, i saw you didnt get any crits...and i think you're a toronto writer....a hated toronto writer if im not mistaken :lol: , but whatever, you didnt do anything to me.

For a simple, as im hoping this is a simple the flow of it all is nice.

THe H is really nice for a simple letter actually, and the I is good too the top of the L is kinda weird, im not a fan, and the should be squarish like the rest of your eltters, plus the bottom of its really weird...and the ONE attached to it is ubbly and doesnt flow nicely at all, fix that

Peace

 

yo yo yo tricks, you never got back at me about the whole trade thing.

 

I like em ad some color to em and out them back up

 

That looks like a bite off of that delta or whoever..

Take a look at the little circles and thats a madd ass bite. [/b][/quote]
dont fuckin call me out for biting, when i put there in the post if you just read it, that its
a style i got from bezerker so read a bit next time.

 

i liked the original one better nerdx, but this one is good as well

i was playing around with this style, and i formed my e's just like that, before even seeing yours

 

bump for new page

 

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throwy, critz please?

 

I havent been writing that long

RUMS

 

nice.

 

you guys really need to start commenting on the post above you, don't think you don't know enough to crit somebody. if it looks wierd to you tell them.

MAker a Laker: I like it a lot, the ball on the front letter sticks out but in a good way

ESKI: i don't know much about throws but the b looks overshadowed by the larger letters. leave out the inner parts of the thow for know and work on that drop shadow. rememer its basically the throw in black shift down and left or up and right or w/e

RUMS: Things are 2 complicated for me , the s is ridiclious. R and U arn't too too bad cept the wierd way the r dissapears behind the u. You are also missing the 3d in places

 

yeah man i tried that style out, kinda like it and im going to try and suceed with it..

good looking on the critque

 

Rumsy, keep at it man

can somebody tell me is structre is getting there for me? i no the k in the bottom in weak

 

Rums i like your style a lot!! The only thing that weird about it to me is that the 3d is a lil off, and im not feeling how the "s" is crooked but the other letters arent....keep on working on that style though man it's sick!!


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^^the town i live in^^

Bump for crits

 

Bartic I personally like the letter structure, the only thing i'd say to work on is the "k" only because it doesn't seem to flow as your other letters do, but def. good stuff man.

 

dont fuckin call me out for biting, when i put there in the post if you just read it, that its
a style i got from bezerker so read a bit next time.[/b][/quote]
nice nerdx feeling this one

 

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i see harsh potential in that style. fuck around with it, change the e a bit cause it looks a lil wierd, and the r isn't exactly pretty, but other than that i really like the style, keep on it.

 

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New name, new style, new game.. shouldn't of ever quit.. I'm coming back tho..

critz?

 

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critz? plz

^^and eski love that style

 

she- it's quite clear that the letters are badly bitten. aside from that, pick one style and stick to it, as opposed to having 3 different letters of pretty different styles, nahmean?

eski- get rid of the random bumps and bits, it's so jolty, try and make your letters smoother, to flow better.