tricks that style looks cool, but the d on grade looks bit too thin.

crits on this plz.
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working on a new name.. Critz?

 

fix the e and make the top of the n go in like the bottom part does also stick with one color for fills

anyway heres mine everyone ignored so crits it please

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bump [/b][/quote]
nice needs tweaking on some letters


have you done that battle with niccsacc yet the one where aces picks the words

 

POW!

 

your a moron [/b][/quote]
there is!

mad nice yarharhar

 

YarHarHar: if you brought the left side of the j down a bit, it would be easier to know that it says JA,
haha before i thought it said IEA haha.

 

The J looks like a V at first glance but it's sick.

 

can someone crit this and stop ignoring it

 

^ We're ignoring it for a reason.

 

try harder next time and we'll crit

 

Testify- The problem with the throw that it is so danm messy, clean it up dont make it so squigly and work on the "k".

K, so i went with a simpiler fill this time, didnt cut the "C" in half, but unfortainetly i think i made the "N" to fat but whatever. And like always ignore tag

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lose the face in the O ACON.

 

looks nice^^ i think the S is too big and the N is a bit weird, too close to the O i guess

 

thug.

 

^^^^hahaha cool. really.

 

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tried to make it better

 

and you didn't succeed.
try less squiggly lines

 

try looking at other throws and simples
n study the letters on them, n change em a bit and incorporate em into your own graff,so you can get some ideas n shit and on how things work so you can start progressing with your own made up stuff