are the actual letters shit or okay

 

Your actual letters are pretty basic right now, but more style will come in time young padawon.....

 

dont write king!

 

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ive just been tryin to keep it simple, any advice?

 

It looks a lot like you're taking a lot of time on a line, speed up your strokes, because you can see that they're all crooked in some spots.

 

The A doesn't fit in cause it's like square and the other letters are curved. Make the P the same size as the rest and make the A curvy it should look better.

 

Your 'D' looks like a 'P' and your 'a' looks like a backwards 'E'.

 

true. ill try to curve the A alittle bit and ill make the D look like a D.

 

haha i thought ur D was a P

 

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does that look any better?

 

So much better, now make 'em same size.

 

yeah, make the letters the same size, itll look much better

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?

 

I don't really like that extra squiggle over the "U" and "H". And your H looks almost like a "P" or if a passerbyer is stupid, they even may think it's a "B".

 

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hows that?

i took your advice on the letter sizes, and i actually used the whole pen (sharpie magnum) instead of just the corner haha.

ps. this is my last one for awhile. i dont wanna become a post-whore

 

yeah man! that nice huge improvement from before, see simple looks alot better, nice job, now u just gotta oput some of ur own style into it, try a few things, dont be afaraid to fail, but man thats looking so much better

 

that is all over the place i would keep it simpler but thats just me im a old school freak

 

everyone was dissing all that toy shit on the last couple of pages, but to be fair this is the toy forum - if you wana see mint handstyles go check out the gallery or battle forums

nosypainter - i agree. he should tidy it up, lose the squiggle and the quote marks, and learn how to do an A

 

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im trying to go simple. you think i should add or change anyhing? and dont tell me to change my name, damn it!

 

hmm i think u shud get the letters all the same size/width and it wud be looking better, u cud put a nice extension on the top of that J too