um well u cud either curve it round like this, or this, make sure the curve is the same size as the letter itself

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sorry my mouse control is shotty, but yeah try to keep the curve the same size as the rest of the letter

 

im loving that first one!
thanks alot man

 

sorry to double post
this is small and quick truth
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ive made your changes. better?

 

Crits?

 

im thinkin about thrownin iin the towel because i practice every day with my book and i dont seem to be gettin any better. plus ive been practicing for 3 months, and when somebody looked through my pictures they liked my friends, who this was his first time doing this, work better. so i dont know what im going to do

 

What do you write?

 

Jonowev:Big improvement looks pretty cool

 

thanks dood.

 

thanks man. ive tried it in marker, and it looks even better

 

New tags. First one is pretty simple and I lifted the prisma for each letter. Second tag is one motion. Crits?

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on the first, the E looks like an A. make it more rounded. other than that, the top one rocks
the second is ok
use the top one

 

whats that have to do with anything? and yea the top sole one is better but if you took away the stars in the second itd look better

 

Good... People like you shouldnt bother with graffiti if you're gonna quit because of that. You act like sketching is a chore, if that's how it feels to you then dont bother with it...

3 Months aint long... you can't expect to be pullin wildstyles out your ass instantly.

 

^^^i was thinkin the exact same thing. you just beat me to it.

 

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any good? This is a mad old one, I havent tagged much recently. Getting back into it now...

 

skan, i like it but try to make it more readable.
park rider, im not feelin the underline.

and today i did like 50 tags in this bathroom no pic at the moment though. might get a pic soon though.

 

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drippy logo!! AHHHHHHHHHH

 

i like the j the a try doing on capital, and the y is allright but bring the ail of it across to go under your j as well it would pul it together and give it that extra simple kick of style try it out and just work on that part...