@Yar
the last 2 would look sick if it said War.
It looks more like War than Jar.
But still mad dope.
Props.

 

thanks man anything i should change?

an is that your pipe?

edit:

check out my newish piece

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^thats sick

 

ohh sweey man thanks, ill do that in my next sketch, in the meantime i cudnt help colouring it

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^ wow very clean

anywho heres mine,
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the D an the E are too thin. make them the same fattness as the O. also take them lil extentions away

 

So what ya'll think of this? I screwed the fade on the U, which haunts me forever, i'll redraw it tonight, and to it properly.

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I like the throw, it's mean as.

Character is good, although the way he's coloured and stripped fill kinda looks 'busy' to me, but that could just be personal preference.

The first 'T' is real nice, I think the top right bit of the 'R' needs to be rounded, or even just the pointed bit near the bottom of that part. The second 'T' is good too but it would look better if it was more like the first 'T'. The 'H' is ok but I would make the horizontal bar fatter. The 'U' isn't too bad either.

Sorry that sounded like a bit of a negative post, haha I didn't mean it like that. I like your page.

 

the j's look like u's

 

truth i love em! what u colour wiv?? and im not too keen on the charac, it would be good just as an outline, but the black u used is 2 thick and lets it down in my opinion.

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yeh the eyes suck in the M but i had 2 try it out

 

yeah....not really feeling the eyes
I like the top throw best...maby because of the thicker outlines but it looks more solid
the piece looks dope...

 

nemz ur first throwy is fuckin killer..

 

hows about this one

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its coloured alot better irl scanner is crap

 

crazy style bro im diggin it... but wat it say lmao now i sound retarded

well im off to smoke a cannon peace

 

it says neza

can anyone else read it?

hows this one my first character

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cheers
-neza

 

nemz: I'm diggin that first throwie

neza: Love that char

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Attempted some 3D. Yeah, I know I'm really damn toy, but lemme get some feedback.

Oh and sorry bout the wack marker that I used. I'm gettin some Prismas saturday.

 

Neza that char. is the shit man.

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I redid it and made it a bit bigger with some minor changes. Crits????

 

TRUTH - I'm loving it. Maybe make the throwie less growing in size so it looks a little more level but good shit none the less.

NEMZ - Loving that piece. The one problem is the extentions off of the N and Z look really out of place. Maybe make them a little thicker to match the thickness of the letters? The throwies are hot man. I agree that the eyes in the M are a little shaky but I understand why you had to try them out.

NEZA - you're getting ahead of yourself man. Go simpler. The coloring is sick but the structure of the letters just isn't there. Once you get simples down that top style could be dope.

JEM - The J is way too big compared to the other letters and try to keep the letters the same thickness throughout the throwie.

SUS??? - I really don't know what to say. I just don't like it. I don't know what to improve on it being as I know next to nothing when it comes to throwies but I just know that I hate that.

 

I like your characters.