sorry to double post. i did this last night, thinking of entering into toy battle crits? [Broken External Image]:http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n88/jonowev/morecomplexjayred.jpg
looks dope man hope your not writing whaste now [/b][/quote] That feels great coming from koper, but why not?
orcal-work on your handstyle, and make all the letters the same size and width etc, o and make the part on the r where it goes into the letter not touch the other side and ghozt i really like it its nice and simple i think that the only problem is how the I is curved and truth those stickers are fucking sweet B)
sorry soze that was a typo anyway yeah XTC was and too my knowledge still gets rep'd in NYC [/b][/quote] crew XTC is one of the most famous crews in the world. dont u fuckin dare. ghozt- ur shading is hot, ur letters are not. focus on the letters, dont worry about shading till ur letters are down, otherwise ur gonna use the shading as a crutch. u are damn good at it though. bouncing- dope, t's to fatt though, even if thats part of the style truth- i like the sticks, but ur missing highlights, put it on the left of EVERY line inside a letter. ur piece, i wanna advise, in my opinion, things like bubbles should be used lightly, as a quiet accent, u shouldnt notice them right away, u should notice the letters. and is that the way bubbles are? all identical getting smaller, and 1 at a time? and shooting straight away from an object? i think not. man, i really think u should chill with colors for now, its nice, but y not focus on the letters? thats the point of graffiti. save that shit for later, like a reward for when uve progressed. work a bit more on ur consistancy, like whats up with the tiny crossbar on the H? hmmmmmm? jonowev- chilllll with that shit. i still need to see some perfect blocks from u yet. ur going for style u cant grasp. dont worry about battles yet. save that shit for later, like a reward for when uve progressed. peace all. ps. o sry torrent i didnt see urs, i was in the post screen. uhhhh, i think the best acvice for u is to go simpler. drop the colors. save that shit for later, like a reward for when uve progressed. (haha ive said that same sentaence 3 times now) CONSISTANCY. work on it. stop using curves so much, get back to straight letters. simpleeeeeeeeeee.
[Broken External Image]:http://img47.imageshack.us/img47/9746/quicksketchdo9.th.jpg fuckin terrible i know. but for five minutes and not knowing how it was gonna come out, i don't think it's too shabby. crits? (i know that the style switches & the perspective sucks.
man, im sick of this. aiight aiight its ur first post, but look around. what im about to say to u has been said soooooooooooooooooo many times its actually unbelievable. drop all that shit. give me block letters. that means fir each letter into a square. no 3d. no color. no curves. aiight? listen to me and ill help u get far. ignore me? well then fuck you, ur on ur own.
[Broken External Image]:http://img282.imageshack.us/img282/816/kaiser019ch7.jpg didnt finish the coloring in the bottom right. most recent sketch of mine. [Broken External Image]:http://img282.imageshack.us/img282/6010/kaiser021gb7.jpg new style im trying. i dont really like the s. [Broken External Image]:http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/5916/kaiser022by8.jpg wickkkked olllld piece, but never posted. ignore the toy arrows in it. [Broken External Image]:http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/8829/kaiser023oz8.jpg ..also pretty old, but whatever. Crits?
alive-thnx man yea i was just tryin out the shadin see how it went since its my first time and yea ill work on my letters more thnx for the advice
its also common curtosy to reply back to crits............ DH, ur last one is the best. u gotta stay simple. i like that hand btw. spuck. . . . give me block letters.
crew XTC is one of the most famous crews in the world. dont u fuckin dare. ghozt- ur shading is hot, ur letters are not. focus on the letters, dont worry about shading till ur letters are down, otherwise ur gonna use the shading as a crutch. u are damn good at it though. bouncing- dope, t's to fatt though, even if thats part of the style truth- i like the sticks, but ur missing highlights, put it on the left of EVERY line inside a letter. ur piece, i wanna advise, in my opinion, things like bubbles should be used lightly, as a quiet accent, u shouldnt notice them right away, u should notice the letters. and is that the way bubbles are? all identical getting smaller, and 1 at a time? and shooting straight away from an object? i think not. man, i really think u should chill with colors for now, its nice, but y not focus on the letters? thats the point of graffiti. save that shit for later, like a reward for when uve progressed. work a bit more on ur consistancy, like whats up with the tiny crossbar on the H? hmmmmmm? jonowev- chilllll with that shit. i still need to see some perfect blocks from u yet. ur going for style u cant grasp. dont worry about battles yet. save that shit for later, like a reward for when uve progressed. peace all. ps. o sry torrent i didnt see urs, i was in the post screen. uhhhh, i think the best acvice for u is to go simpler. drop the colors. save that shit for later, like a reward for when uve progressed. (haha ive said that same sentaence 3 times now) CONSISTANCY. work on it. stop using curves so much, get back to straight letters. simpleeeeeeeeeee. [/b][/quote] I'm getting ahead of myself. Thanks bro. I'll go simpler. I thought my shit was a little curvy.
alive- hell i'm willing to learn. i ain't got time for it now, but so i know,what kind of block letters do you want? how basic, and what do i do to start progressing into extensions everyone else- i really don't have the right to crit anyone here yet. i'll leave it at "looking good for now.