in a word... no. i can read it for the most part but its just too jumbled up. the most important thing for you right now is to instinctively KNOW how letters should look. in this world you pretty much gotta grind hard to actually get past the simple stage. just let it progress naturally thru a gang of training/sketching/practicing sessions and im tellin you, homey... itll come to you. you gotta crawl before you can walk. in this shit, fools be running fast. dont play yaself and get run over.
niccs got it right on, sucks when youre still trying to learn, and the progress is coming slow. its just hard to read that, try and make it more simple. not saying go all the way back to simples though. just try and take some of the wild out of it
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I like it but there are some parts where it is kinda shakey but keep it up. Maybe if u go just a bit simpler then it will look better. But i wana see it with color, it'll look pretty raw.
^^^keep em the same size for know but that was a good idea with the color names can never read em right i like that block buster SE craks are nice another sketch [Broken External Image]:http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/6880/1016061925amt9.jpg critz i ran out of markers
k duno which i posted b4 so bear with me... [Broken External Image]:http://img486.imageshack.us/img486/936/dsc01015my6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/3072/dsc01018nu9.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/9936/dsc01023xc7.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img77.imageshack.us/img77/5840/dsc01024nk1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/1028/dsc01025zo9.jpg
ooookay first work on the N(completely) AND your D ,also put have somewhat space on your sketch.Try sketching in lines first I just found this cause I'm mega new to this forum click here! Believe it or not that thread makes sketching easier when you find out good ways line by line or w/e.