nah dude...those arnt good at all. as for the hallow...there is really no uniform structure to the letters. I know that all the letters dont need to have the same structure...but there needs to be flow to it. Some of your letters are all rounded edges...the other letters are all sharp edges. Some are bigger, some are smaller. Some are at an angle, some arnt. Some parts of the bomb have drop shadow, some dont. Its terribly inconsistant and no flow. I know you said "drunken hollow" and all, but that is bad. And if the stuff above that is sober...well then...
naw all drunk, i see what ur saying. i see what ur saying, i havent busted it too many times but what im going for is to have the A and the O rounded and the G and the E sharp and similar ^_^ . it looks better on paper but i will try and keep working with it. this is another i posted probably around last week. [Broken External Image]:http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/4818/200610070005pi4.jpg still tweekin it.
ahem. but what? way to ruin a wall? please man, think before you speak [/b][/quote] both of those bombings are incredibly ugly! they both look like the hulks retarded twin, work on your alphabetical structure, and dont do graffiti on a wall unless a miracle happens, and you stop sucking!
nice NOMX, you can count! I absolutely need to quote it because if noone gets the point acoss to the kid, he will continue to ruin walls without thinking believe that! ive been in the game for too long to see these to bombers coming out here destroying walls with horid work i can vouch that, mabe you cant
chill the fuck out bumping the fuckin picture isnt gonna do anything but make u have to see it a bunch of times. dont be pissed becuase i called u on that shit, and if u been in the "game" for so damn long then get the fuck out of the toy section if ur not giving crits.
believe me, i am giving crits by teling him to stop fucking up walls. and did i not say he needs to work on his alphabetical structure? no wait.....i did! im not going to spend my time arguing with you because your not worth a miniute of my time, but id like to try to help anyone here that needs it
mostly i write speak, but ive been trying to do some ashid pieces as well. these are all from the summer except for the one on the bedroom wall. i did that about a month ago when i moved back to school in my friends new place.
haha. yeah now that he knows that he will make it look more like the original hulk and not some ghetto version of his twin. i hope his style gets better. now his progression will SOAR above there rest. now for aSHID stuff looks good man im liking the colors your using. but just making a suggestion that the I in the last one might look better it wasnt connected to the H.
Internet beef faggerts.. That wall is inside, In my own home where nobody else sees it. I'm not out destroying good walls like duf (p.s. homie you suck too) And as far as that looking like the hulk's retarded twin i can totally see that, way to be creative while trying to insult. And like i said that flick is over a month old, just after i got out of debt, and could afford a can. Let's see your pieces beefers? Are you better than me? do you know how to hold a spray can? And i know you're all thinking (wait this guy knows i don't Paint!!! Oh fuck my internet coolness is gone. I asked for crits, not beef, and if you fucks were a little smarter you would notice that my origional post was to "so" Telling HIM not to destroy good walls. graffiti is a side project for me, but yeah beef with me online haha If you want to battle me and see how horrible i am feel free to pm me. as a matter of fact i call out duf. Battle me. Beat me, or try. PM me fucker
man... Stay inside. Sketch a lot more, that one liner will be tight once you steez it out, but don't ruin things people see with that narsty shit. peace