thanks man yeah i know my 3d is kinda beatzo.

 

come on man you know the rule...comment the pic above yah!

 

um well lets see...what does it say?

 

NAR

 

go simpler it looks whacko

 

nemz you've got a nice looking style going on there feeling them man

 

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you from the UK? [/b][/quote]
yeah bwoy, wales UK

 

heres sommin a bit more simple

crits

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-neza

 

old stuff from when i used to write syko

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first ever 3d
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first ever wild (reads syko)
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just thout id sho u guys sum of my older stuff

 

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i kno it shit but plz can i have some constructive crits like what to change and possible colours?

 

I think nemz is almost ready to move on.

Gratz.

 

nemz you've got a nice looking style going on there feeling them man
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nems those r ill

 

anyway when you bite you loose so stop biting sky five you duesch bag asshole and stop writting graff faggot![/b][/quote]
What the fuck is your damn problem!I didnt bite,i can see why you think i did but you dont have to talk fucking shit about me!If you weren't gonna give me a crit then dont say anything at all.I dont give a damn what you say! imma still be writing if i have to change my style because it looks like a bite i will!but dont talk shit about noone!

 

dont worry bout it. your shit does have a similar style but who gives.
i would say watch your extensions, a few of them look a bit out of
place, but other than that youve got the letter structures. Just keep
working on it and you will get it. Keep It Up

 

nems has some good ones, but def isnt good enough to leave the toy forum yet

im sure he knows that.

its just that all these ridiculous toys that dont understand the word simple and always think that theyve "already mastered simples" and try to do wild styles make nems look like a beast hah

the colorless pen one looks fresh though nems, don't get me wrong, im sure you know what im sayin.

on another note (not directed at nems at all)

IF YOU CANT DO SIMPLES YOU CAN'T DO WILDSTYLES SO STOP THINKING YOURE SOME HOT GRAFF HEAD AND JUST SWALLOW YOUR PRIDE AND PRACTICE SOME SIMPLES JESUS CHRIST.

 

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Fixed my R and V looks more simple, crits please?

And joke clean your letters up alittle ,the little part on the middle-left of the D looks weird. Do it less complex your letters dont show definement except your R alittle.

 

make your letters flow, the "o" and "v" seem like a completely different style then the "e" and "r", just make all the letters have the same style

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Crits???

 

in the 2nd pick the red throw could use some work, I like the Sun char. its pretty tight.The yellow one is the best imo...and is that your tag to the left or something random?