minesweep....keep all your letter the same size/ thickness, and the parts that stick on the "e" and "l" dont seem poportional to the rest of the sketch, and what exactly does the throw say??
yea that drawing has been one of my inspirations, so i look at it a lot hoping........................ soory for the off topic
[Broken External Image]:http://img285.imageshack.us/img285/5029/sh059bc9.jpg is this one a little better then the last?
minesweep-ok im really not good enuff to crit anyone on theyr stuff but just keep sketchin man trust me [Broken External Image]:http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/6963/scan0025yb6.jpg crits??? disregard garfield and his teddy lol
[Broken External Image]:http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/kottonmouthclockwork/212309.jpg My first bubble set in my blackbook. Its easy simple two stone on both. Wanted to make it as easy as possible and easy to throw. Crits?
shifty i like it but try make the r and the p more bulged atthe bottom like the E. [Broken External Image]:http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/20/dsc01090gf3.jpg couldnt sleep n this was crying out to be dressed with color, so this is wat happened.
I bombed the cover of my book. On the bus to school. "A Seperate Peice" [Broken External Image]:http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/7451/1001278fs4.jpg anyway critz? excuse the bumpyness and the unfinished ness.
u blatently never finished that on purpose!!! who would do the black outline then start the purple one without finishing the black? have some consideration for the post above fuck! :angry:
Like i said, pardon the "unfinishedness" Obviously meaning... I DIDNT FINISH IT. I didnt like the way it was turning out so i said screw it and just cut it off there... anyway your peice looks okay, but to similar to all of your others... umm, and the shadows not lookin to good, just use a different shade of the same color.
[Broken External Image]:http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/2038/can2yv3.jpg my enry for the can2 battle...i would try somthing crazy but everyone said i should try out simples so crits?