crory baby i like the one that says cror best, but stick to less colors, feelin the r's


ehh...

 

word furious ive like both A's

 

i love simples! like it furious.

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outline, still gonna change it round a bit. says star track.
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piece for bb battle. not too keen on this 1. ...

 

haha, thought it was some old shit, cause that shit looked waaacckk and nothin like your stuff now :lol:

 

im still pretty new to freehand stuff, did alot of stencils and that kinda of stuff.
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decided i wanted to go with a two letter style of things, critz? advice?
thx

 

nemzo i like the whole "track" word best out of all those, the "scary" one would look hotter with 3d instead of a dropshadow in my opinion.

another quick sketch: the e came out fugly

 

okay this was the other throw with the v ive been drawing with:
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and this is how the v looked when i altered it because it looked like a g:
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and how can i make the v and i for the rest of this throw?:
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definetly liek teh second one the best
some new ish
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crits on it? thx peace
reads MUGS

 

but which v is betteR?

and how can i make the V and I for the rest of the 4th pic.

 

third v deffinelty

 

wait are you gonna have the more circular V with the 4th pic? because that might not look to great..

 

bump for new page

 

i dunno man, i dont really like how u made the G green while the rest of the letters were yellow.

 

once again i gotta bump this... can ppl just crit whats above them if they are asking for crits??

lilrocky-try simple pieces wiv no addons for now m8.

viate, ur throws are fine! stop asking how to do em lol they are good

 

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alright mugs, the M isnt bad, but the U G and S need some work. The U is readable, but its been bent funny, almost looks like a K. The bottom of the G is too squished up, sort of looks like an E

The S is just looking like a C or something, the bottom left of it is too covered by the G

also, dont add arrows yet, arrows are usually there to add flow to a peice, or to direct a viewers eyes to certain areas. yours are just kind of sticking out everywhere

im not going to say go simpler, cause its all in the learning process to make errors. just lose the arrows for now, and keep playing with the letters

 

nemz idk ur simpoler shit ur old shit is much fresher im stjust not feelin flow in that
and liek do u think this shit is better thatn the shit i just poster for instance
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nemz im not really feeling that, i know its your style, but the letters just arent all there for me. in particular the R

thats just me, its still nice though

 

o adn thatnks novella...sry for the double post

 

this is better, because youve lost the arrows, the letters need a bit of tweaking, but it looks nice otherwise