Some fo Mse's shit, he couldnt post it so im postin it up for him.

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furious...yeah thanks, and i was just getting kind of mad because he was prty much saying i should not try anymore
,,,,not like i am listening to that or nothin. but yeah i will take more time.need a flat surface...been doing it in my lap at the comp. =)

 

shit and stil no crits. Damn you guys are rough

 

I like the one outlined in red. Do me a clam

 

that shoe is fuckin dopee i love it :wub:

 

Crits?
I think it looked better before I fucked it up trying to color it:



bape: i like the 2nd b better, but yeah try an uppercase one too and see how it looks. might look even better.

AoAssis or Mse or whatever: shits lookin dooopee. i love your style.

Sear: Hot shit man! keep postin more!

Alera: don't like it too much. it's too busy. hard to make out the letters.

 

Any Critz all i got was that the z looked like a 2
keso it did look better in pencil cause u coloured to far in on the k

 

lovin it alot man nice, simple, and good. Keep it up.

And Frat it looks pretty good the just that Z that needs work...and the glob or arrow right in the middle of the C and the E looks pretty odd, Other than that it looks nice. And the last one the C looks alittle odd.

 

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Any Critz all i got was that the z looked like a 2
keso it did look better in pencil cause u coloured to far in on the k [/b][/quote]
Yeah the Z does look like a 2 but other than that the throwie looks fine. The piece look like it has too many arrows. at the end it look like theres 2 z's cause of that weird extension.

poopis: thanks man

 

dident get that many critz <_<

keso- it does look better wit the pencil
only thing im not fellin is the leg of the K
just my 2 cents

 

The A kind of got lost once you went more complex. but other than that its nice.

 

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Nother attempt at a peice i know the size goes down just criticism on the structure on my new lettering please before i color and try to add arrows.(might have to click to see the hidden features)

 

ye looks kinda like an R

 

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posted a how to do the fill for this in the new2graf thread . . . get ups

dude above . .your letters get progressively smaller man, use that eraser and try again, maybe grab a ruler and draw a rectangle then fill in 90% or so of that rectangle with letters . . make the rectangle kinda narrow thoo . . 2inches high

 

pretty dope sky, you make it look so easy


quick simple i came up with today

edit: im not too fond of the T...

 

i like the colours sky what does it say?
myl not bad looksw like youre getting a grip with structure i would take thoose little things of the ends though,
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crits?

 

it says R . . . SEAR i dig your style, you might wanna try fixin the R up alil thoo, maybe have some open space in that top loop part of the R . . once you get that down i think your good to go on up to the reg thread . .SEFT - yeah the T comes out too far, too big compared to the other letters . . .maybe try gettin some vertical movement going with some well placed extensions, help tie in your letters more

 

i did this this moring. pleas give feedback

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and i did this for my friend last week

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feedback plz