hot page, theres too much to comment on....just busted out this pen freestyle

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i like the style u got always with the lines fading into the center but you should change it up every now and then....i dont like the letters so much on this except the b...pretty good tho

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stickers are from jamaica

 

Tricks that is ill!

 

damn sky5
i like your shit.

 

im not feeling the k to much, work on the style of it...

 

Really good job as usual, maybe try your hand at a deifferent style?

 

exchange for sky5
u know, whenever i fill shit inm it loses its. . . i dunno. sharpness. definition. cuz the lines are to fat and rounded then i think.
then a quick pencil sketch. ive vowed to start always using the pencil







peace.

 

Kinda wierd because I vowed to use pen haha

Not really feelin the reks sketch prolly because what you said... sharpness etc. The cear sketch looks good though. The E and the R are nice, the C and the A could use some work though. Keep sketchin!

 

Reks. Looks okay, Needs a little cleanng up.

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Critz Please. Sorry for the huge ass pic... I cant minimize it on this comp. Anyway im thinking of changhing my name to something a lil shorter. Maybe like "A-MEN" since i already know those letters and that name cracks me up :lol:

 

Just want to say that the W gets messed up on all of the things that I see you do. The K looks a little weird because it is connected but other than that it's nice. Keep it up.

 

Anoda Nu Name ... DUB This tym...Messin round widdit

Lil Throw and Karak...

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Crits And Comments Pleeeease...............................

 

speak english please.

 

word it actually took me a few minutes to figure out what "anoda" meant.

 

okay...heres another new name...just messing around with it...that better

now can i have some crits and comments on it now please...

 

Ras can't really help u out cause i'm no good at throwies but looks good to me..
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Crits?

 

Holy Sh*t Sumoe thats Ace Mate

 

See you took a little shine to sky5 work

 

im not feeling the k to much, work on the style of it... [/b][/quote]
did u know that queso means cheese in spanish hahahaha