on future pieces i would color it in better, doesn't look like a lot of people would see that one so its okay... extend the arm of your R a bit more do you know how to go back over outlines with your fill color to make the line's ends sharp and not round like that? example you paint a brown triangle around the triangle in the r and it's line goes half way over the black, so it sharpens all the edges.
use some happier colors too. i like you style, its crisp and simple, but yeah can control comes to you the more you paint. and i think the term you are looking for is cutbacks.
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thanks. it got a little cramped at the end, due to a hole in the wall. i guess i could have made it the punchout in the "s", but whatevs.
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