my very very very first peice

 

ew^. looks like u used a lotta paint on that one ... and i wuldn't call it a pieace just yet maybe more of a throw. i wuld say to make simpler letters and stay away from paint for a bit

 

Advice from anyone? Crits...

 

go dumm

 

trash for your h which is fucked up just take your t and loose the top part of the t and move that letter to the enend then figure out a new t

 

theres a luster on this site i think...

 

im pretty sure it say JUST

 

i had to be the funny one. sydney trains

 

nice try

 

what a jokester

 

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critz or what? i did it at night so I kinda forgot about a few places, i.e: right side U and the dipper.

 

is this the last page?

 

of course when i post i get dicked on the last page

 

theres a luster on this site i think... [/b][/quote]
yeah it says just

 

am i showing immprovement(this is from the past 3 monthes)

 

not bad, i like the colours, just join the middle bit on the i think would look better, and i dont really like the cross bar bit on the A, but cool

 

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these 2 pics are terrible
you cant see the lines of the H but you get the idea
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