Furious i love it man accept the R its a bit wierd, the right stick is to short in my oppinion. So how about a crit for mine please
lol, k ty for that one and your right after i look at it closer it makes sense to do that lol, but how is my shadow that is the main thing i tried here
lol, sorry if your talking to me, so your saying to the side of the piece and the bottom of it? [/b][/quote] Yep ...
AAARGH Carnt adapt to those letter's...going back tah Dub ! .. lol [Broken External Image]:http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/3046/kep3tn8.jpg post it anyway crits...
RAs= i like it, the P on the simple one though is a bit wierd, though the throws are k, in my oppinion K, here is kind of my first serious attempt at a Throwy, I am sure its probaly somebody elses style, but just trying to get a hang of the flow of a style and some ideas . I was also working on my tag so ignore the squigly lines [Broken External Image]:http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/1496/scan0010bb5ro4.jpg
first of all . . . i like the whole theme ; butt of course, here'sz the critisizim, your name kind of blends into the background [even if you finished this all quickly] you want your name to stick out but being able to keep your background as eye-candy to add to your name. joo know what i mean? anyways, your characters are great, keep that up. but all of this was my suggestions. keep practicing, add more color, and keep the background simple until you develop more letter structure. hope i helped somewhat.[/b][/quote] thanks for the crittz, i realized after how much the colour scheme in the letters sucka nd dont stand out at all, thanks for the crittz..anyone got anymore?
^^ youve had crits :blink: acon i like the first one but ur 2nd one suck's and you could do with work on yur handies
[Broken External Image]:http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/other/STA40625.jpg Sketch but coloured in on the computer
daymmm trash thats amazing! dont be so lazy and colour it in! [Broken External Image]:http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/8755/61jz5.jpg dunno if im feeling this...atleast now i have a style that i can improve on Crits?
em i saved the changes so its replaced with the coloured one.. its exacctly the same only a black outline no fill etc. ill post another pic of it non coloured if i can be assed
trash,its nice but like someone said a while back, it looks like thrash with the extension on the t but good job nemz-i love that blue pen one entropy(or whatever)-i find it very hard to believ you have "books full of letter studies" just do what that one person said.then work on changing those simple little by little. try not to let a single letter overlap itself.
Sumthang Nu' Decided to go with ANOTHER new name .. DET ...i dont think its taken anyway here's sumthin i jus did ... [Broken External Image]:http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/6245/detyk4.jpg crits crits crits please thankyooou
firstly, crit the people above, like me and trash. secondly, work on your tag before you start trying to peice a new name. thirdly, LFC SUCK
Craze-Dope style man!I really like your work Ras-Go more simple. [Broken External Image]:http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/1682/pict0658rg1.jpg
i like that b just like 2 parts look wierd (the top and the bottom left) not bad tho heres something i did in US history, got reaaal bored during a video [Broken External Image]:http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/2026/usdoodlecu6.jpg
BES - looks like you had a good idea but im not feeling the arrow work, i think you should add a couple more arrows to even the top and the bottom of the letter. DCAP - the background looks good, work on the consistency of the letters.