lol, sorry about the vaguenessism. keep the width of the letters the same

 

Yo I'm feelin that middle on the left but the right leg on the A is a little weird. Bottom on the right don't have the leg sticking out that far.
Top on the right is pretty good just work out some of the little kinks in it like the top of the C goes too far on the left. Other than that keep it up.

I'll post a sketch soon then color it. Maybe expect it tonight?

 

thanks man, that really helped **starts sketching like a mad man, MAD MAN I TELL YOU!**

 

Bumb this for anyone lazy to search for "geelblauw" on google video.

EDIT: I like the colours for the middle one, looks nice.

 

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for the handstyle battle might enter
and jar thats awesome

 

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throw ups yank!

 

jar that piece is dope paint it

 

new shit i've been working on, reads BRITISH

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Any comments, crits, on my first coloured piece ?
Thanks Guys
Entropy

 

simples

 

Dont add those little random things.

 

hottest yettttttttt finally made the leg longer on the r

 

it was pointless 2 colout it. the time it took u to colour it, u could of done 5 more simple outlines, with no colour

end of

 

oh n jar, likin it again, like the way the loopy lines are different, better this time. tho im not too keen on the 3d which just stops at a scruffy sorta edge like that, i like it more when the 3d has the 1 definitive thickness throughout...

 

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is that a lil more consistent?

 

its got too many pointless bits, like the bottom of the D, top of the C and all over the P
dont do ur 3d all the way to the VP, stop it after like 1-3cm.

 

can someone crits this dont know if its good enough to enter the battle
and im not gonna use this exact one im gonna change the r and m but crits anyway

 

Shit thanks man. I really appreciate it. I'll try to add some sharp corners and stuff. Here's something I did just 2 mins ago... I'll work on it... What do you mean by dressing up the letters though? I didn't really get that. Kinda vague

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