Last sketch for tonight... If I could, I would soo put a W and an S on this, but fucking page ran out... I'll get another sheet and tape it on tomorrow... View attachment 232832 Also, crits/comments on my handie. Didn't seem to get much in the Tags thread... Forget the colors, all I had was 2 highlighters and I was messing around... And I screwed up on the hook of my K a little... It's usually more sharp. Anyway, here it goes View attachment 232833 knews2 Thanks!
New name and new (awesome) sig I see... I fucking love your style. Keep it up. That K in the kilogram is a perfect example of what I like about your style... I just like it. Can't explain why but it's good. Switch up your B since it's not doing as well as the other letters... Wwell switch up the others too, I see pretty much the same outline from you everytime it seems
bump on new page And myl, it happens from time to time. I've seen that sero sketch been bumped a couple times too haha
yeah i know...i dunno it just bugs me for some reason cause its like "yeah...that person is really gonna pay attention to a crit on some old ass shit" i dunno but wow, that for what you have so far...that kne is looking really hot and that hand style is making me go blind, shit hurts to read with them colors
yeah gotta start experimenting w other stuffffffff negro that epod ish is over a year old, he doesnt even post anymore and he DID belong in the toy forum but thats besides the point.
looks liek someone bending over wiht a scar on there ass...while sitting out you letters [/b][/quote] haha i got that like 4 times at school but disregarding that part is it just something i should just leave alone?and move on?
m8 i told u wat to change, now do a piece taking in mind wat iv said. nevermind the shiz round it cuz lets be honest, ur neva gona paint that, an wat ppl seem 2 forget is a ablackbook is something in which u practice ur styles to better them for painting. not doin lil faces, n scars on the page. shorten ur 3d by about half again. and u still got random bits all over.
this is some of my work its usally crap and made in like 5 secs but just to improve skillzz i want to get some good hard advice pleas (not nessesarely HARD ) (alpha) this is a piece ... [Broken External Image]:http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/4025/alphabu1.th.jpg (ALpha) also a small piece (like half piece half bomb) [Broken External Image]:http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/9537/aplha2hh5.th.jpg (alpha) this is a kinda wildstyle but very simple . to bad the colour kwaliti on camera is bad .... [Broken External Image]:http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/5051/aplha3zp6.th.jpg (a) this is a letter , I just want to know if you guys think i lack in originality and stuff just tell me what you think about it [Broken External Image]:http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/851/hxz8.th.jpg (kayne) again a wildstyle but its hard to read ill work on it [Broken External Image]:http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/5808/kayne2hg8.th.jpg (Kayne) this is a bomb design [Broken External Image]:http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/7641/kayne4ze3.th.jpg just tell me all you think i need too know okay thx PeaCe
yes you do lack originality because that is a line for line bite off the A in the "new 2 graff" thread you need to do simple block letters and stop biting
yes you do lack originality because that is a line for line bite off the A in the "new 2 graff" thread you need to do simple block letters and stop biting [/b][/quote] and seeing as you bit from the new 2 graff thread....u wud of seen the part about " dont try to rock wildstyle " ... hers summet i just did [Broken External Image]:http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/3503/det2zo8.jpg crits and comments please ...
DET - im not feeling the arrows....try it without. the E is curvy but the D is blocks, try and keep it consistent and bottom of the T is too thin