that garc one looks crazyyyy really feelin it, focus more on that style kid, the sketchy outlines dont really look too hot.

knews, super hot, i like the inside 3d thing you started doin.

 

sloppy 10 min sketch

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just a simple crits?
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your 3d is way off and the letters are to plain. sick N tho!

 

yea thats what i wanted it to look like and its a simple meaning i make it plain..... and how do i correct my 3d?

 

draw a straight line from right to left about 1cm from the bottom of the page

make every "3d" line that you do, be allighned with that line on the bottom

make the shawdowing reach the top of the letters when its going out, not just close to the end
or it looks ghetto

 

i colered it anyway :/ crits?

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Fix your A, and make all your letters uniform to that N.

 

umm,i dont know if its my computer but i cant see any of bouncingsouls stuff from last page or my sketch from last page so im gonna post it again. its just a fuck around thing just want some crits to see if its might be worth addin 3D maybe a forcefield i dont know.

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edit: i know the C is whack any suggestions?

 

bumping for crits didnt get any.

prank- im feeling that second one. [/b][/quote]
still none yet. please just one i fixed the g already but havent got the new ones up yet.

 

bump one last time before I go to bed... More schooltime sketch action tomorrow

 

Change the N-style on the purple, it looks like an H, I like the first one, unique way of doing the holes.

 

bump one last time before I go to bed... More schooltime sketch action tomorrow [/b][/quote]
Pretty sick, I'd take off the nobbly bits around on the outside, if you understand what I mean.

And the 2nd pic it blends too well, maybe define the last letter more.

 

yeah bounce some letters i see from you are so fresh, and then some of them arent, like, all within the same sketch, but i can tell your not biting, you need to find 4, or 5 letters you can consistently do well, then make them flow together, then FUCKING COLOUR EM lol, anyways heres a piece of bullshit i sketched for an exchangem sucks monkey ass but whatever

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Duf, I hate the holes in them personaly and lose that bump on the top of the N and those little things on OGA (purple one). I liked ya DUF stuff.
I still write NiL but I changed it because people more likely think it is a crew.. Is that why you changed names or..

 

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Seriously, crits please. Tricks-dope, I dont like dark colors but whatever.

Bouncing soul. Looks good. U on 12 OZ?

 

Sketch for a girl... "bella"

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...and yeah, I do post on 12oz under the same username

 

Is that the only shadeing you do?

 

DCAP- the c doesnt fit the rest of the letters otherwise i like it.

BAWK- those colors are fresh as hell, and it doesnt matter if thats the only "shading" he does, cuz it always looks hot. and its 3d not shading.

and tricks or bouncing soul, do you wanna do an exchange?