Yeah, seriously, do some less complicated stuff.

 

Yeah' that MB looks good the rest is really messy stick to simple stuff.

 

just work on your letter structure. check out a vast array of other artists and let different styles influence you, rather than just checkin out one style. add some diversity to the artists that influence you.

 

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havnt been on here in a while...heres some semi-new workk any crits...?

 

That first flick is PERFECT. I love it... And I like the yellow/green one in the last flick

 

amen^ that first flick is BOOMIN, i wanna see that painted

 

lol i was juss thinkin the same thing as u 2 lovin the simples and that yellow or w/e colour it is one

 

Yeah, the rest... not so much

 

ya....Holiday Styles, i'm begining to doubt that those peices are yours and that you didnt bite them. cause how do you go from that fuckin bomb ass one on the top and the lower one in the last pic....to the second peice....or the upper one in the last peice. im guessing those were just earlier peices???....i hope so at least cause those other two are so dope.

 

left behind on the other page. crits please

 

MENZ- line up your letters better make em the same size etc, dont make em too bubbly like that and draw em much bigger.

HOLIDAY- i like the same ones bouncer mentioned. paint that ish baby. you def know how to rock a simple

haha menz doesnt like the theme of my last piece hahaaa

 

aight ima work on makin em the same size and shit but "bubbly" is the style. i am expanding the bubbliness

 

-->hey i was told to post this in here so some critique would be great thanks

hey i just started with this and was wondering if anybody could give me some feed back

i know i have a long way to go to be as good as some of the other guys on here

i could just use some advise on the best way to get better at sketching and working on letters

 

who the hell told you to post in the toy section? that shit is fresh as hell.

get that shit off paper and on some trains, man!

 

i love your style and i really want to see that painted, just leave the penis out.

 

haha baper :lol: ....that shits ill. very clean style n im feeling it. never thought i'd say "i'm feeling it" to a picture of a penis, but hey! ps. i freakin love your signature.

 

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crits?

edit: last one was a pen freestyle =]