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im begging you to slow down. make your letters the same size and stop fucking around with backgrounds and colors. focus on your letters.


necro- looks dope but i dont see letters?

 

they was the onlu colours i had

 

lol, ras i think he is saying to go simpiler and make all the letters parrallel, thats what i have been doing after Neza told me to do block letters all the same width, and parralel. And lol that has helped me alot i see my letter structure improveing more and more

 

Yeah....and i have been doing simples...alot...and i think its helped out my eltter structure aswell considering this..

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one of my first sketches ^^

to this..

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i think i have improved abit on structure...

 

i personally like that some letters are bigger than others in your style cause to me it looks real original and seems to flow nice....just my opion

 

Yeah Atel, I really like the one with the litte E, it flows really nice.
Paint it and show us

 

yeah thats my point...now i think i have evolved my own style by putting in little block letters as my own ...like t-kid...he put karaks in nerly all his peices...

anyway .... testing out my new touch twin..summet rushed..

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crits on this please... ? thanks

 

Ehh, I dont like that one to much, although it is very original.
Im not feeling the 3D, or the T

 

it wuz rushed....just to get a feel for my new tools

 

Your stuff is very clean
Are those lines done with a ruler or free hand?

 

free hand....you can see the splodges on the lines were i stopped to readjust my arm...i never use rulers...artists dont use rulers...espaecailly A* students

 

I was doing Spanish homework and found these old classroom sketches creeping around

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it kool that you handwriting is kinda of a handstyle...lol

 

That KNE is fucking sick, please make that a finished peice haha


And yeah, I noticed your handwriting also, pretty fly.

 

yer....the KN are sick but i dont like the E..it dont flow....the Knews on the first pic is proper smart !

 

bump for some crits

 

Your red outline is a bit messy some parts... The left side of the N doesn't look good to me but I love your A and your R man...

I was just starting English when I found this fucker

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Bump.
Can I get more C+C?

 

That looks pretty good atually. Keep doing shit like that and work on that handie a bit