meana be working but messed around on computer instead, 3dsm + vray

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ya thats a sweet baper its got like veins and stuff lol the dude above me with the 3d is kinda cute but itd be better if u drew it D:

k heres my latest disasterpiece

 

It doesn't even remotely look like the graffiti creator letters

 

near i like that but the orange is too bright and your R isnt too nice.

new ish pushin maself
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much better than the one i made last night.......
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crits...

 

^That 3D is really good. It looks like 3D should.^
BUT, the fill is sloppy, the color scheme isn't super hot, and the cloud looks gay, the drips look REAL gay, and the letters could stand to be improved, unless you are going for simples.

 

thnx.....


and the fill n coloration r cuz i didnt have much choice. the fill in the letters is ball point pen. i need new markersss.....
and yeah i wanna keep it simple for now. im not ready to move up.

 

cold...better than your other thing u posted...take terowers advice

aseb...nice...but i aint liking the B on the middle one ... rest if very good. ..

sum very sloppy shit...tired an grounded and fucking boooooooored

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crits on this please.... ?

i know the'll be bad

 

this place has been dry tonight.

atel it looks ayt man but i dont like how ur letters are always joined, free em up let em breathe.
cheers for the crit aswell bro

 

il put an end to it, but i bet some motherfucker will post right after me..

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ras u should do simples. THEY DO HELP.

 

awwww yeh nemz bringin heet, i well like the top one, the bottom one trips me out lol

 

that some tight shit, ur's flowin that style....

 

asem fill in that empty space with some 3d or somethin brahhh

 

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attempt 3.

a little crooked.

 

cold thats lookin ayt man.
baper i will bro im workin on it, u wan exchange or somit im bored out ma brains

 

mate i like it but u need to either develope your letter stucture or change the style cuz i wanna see what else u can do

 

ill hit you with an exchange

 

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umm...all works but the R look like a B abit...