Bump is used to 'bump' your picture so that it will be seen and given crits, something you obviously don't know how to do. It's etiquette around here to crit the person above you before posting your own shit, especially since in_the_red gave you advice before.
crits please on the handstyles not the throw up that is quickly and shitty done [Broken External Image]:http://img1.yoxio.com/img/258795.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img1.yoxio.com/img/260105.jpg
take off the star and quotes crap... you don't need that shit. i like it, but the first letter needs to be a little more defined.... its an s though, right? other than the S and the e which looks like a tiny squished letter... i like it, nice flow, readable....
huh? why would that matter at all man, im just gettin into taggin n shit n wanted some criticism, chill
huh? why would that matter at all man, im just gettin into taggin n shit n wanted some criticism, chill [/b][/quote] It's just ettiquite. Heaps of people post their pics up and not enough people give crits, that's all. I'm not having a go at you or anything haha.
yeah my mistake i forgot to say thanks lotus, and i can see where youre comin from in_the_red, ill know for next time now i just dont feel im good enough to be critisizing other peoples work yet is all
Steez_b- i cant realy read it but i got Shoeka out of it? Crits, on tag worked it out a lilttle bit better (i think) [Broken External Image]:http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q203/Bleep36/tag1bleep008.jpg
ha sorry, didnt know but any more help? [/b][/quote] Haha it's all good. Nah I dunno if I can help you any more unless you put a new pic up.
Maybe try and write it faster... It looks like your hand was shaking. Also, I'd make the letters the same size for now.
Snap, right? First get rid of that arrow on your P. And I find a tag looks better without jagged lines unless you know how to work 'em right. Just try to smooth them out and your golden.