EVERYONE crit the person above first!

Mez its ok but some of the lumps on the letters look a bit stupid, bring ur letters closer and smooth them out its be good.

Masoe the bottom ones by far the best, but fix ur E its lookin like a capital N with an extension out the bottom left.

Cine... practice more

 

masoe fix ur e and ull be illin

 

thanks

now thats gonna drive me insane

 

see i like when people actually give you advice like eskimo but there no reason to assholes like jerm... but thanks for the advice

 

loook anyone can give u advise but it all matters if u listen to them and and do it

 

i hear ya but they shouldnt jus be like im gonna bleach my eyes and stupid shit like that. btw Quadratic: thats some ill shit

 

here my first sketch


crits???

 

If its ur first ever sketch i spose its not bad.. just make the letters a LOT thicker

 

first u should resize ur image before u post it would help.

1st one not bad but u need to start simple learn the structure of each letter. and make them the same size, block letters. this should make ur graff look alot betta. so take this advise and use it...

 

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i no i fucked the shadow up bad lol and i wasnt going for a drop shadow but i sorta was...changed my mind halfway through

 

If you're not going to crit or comment the person above you who posted some work, why bother critting you at all when you obviouly haven't critted...

 

2000 pages baby woooooot!

 

i was getting to it and the server was busy chill no hostility


tark if its ur first sketch thats not bad but thicken the letters but keep em more simple for now

 

page 2000 hahaa

 

IM BACK NIGGAZZ


Something new sorry for the shitty photo h34r:

 

2000 pages of complete shit. YAY! Volume the top of the O is a little weird but whatever. I like it.

 

loooks ill....all prefect all u need to do is avance on to more andavance styles

 

hahaa funni fucker!...but we are toys remba that! so keep postin up!
Jun 15 2005, 01:51 AM was the first post give it time and it will have 4000 pages of shit hahaa...na we just helpin each other in this forum...peace!

 

I'm a toy aswell so ya know I just haven't been here lately. My parents blocked it.