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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Eskimo33

    Eskimo33 Senior Member

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    D_G clean those up and erase all the shit on the inside then repost. Also try to move your letters closer together I dont like how the A sits on top of the S.
     
  2. imported_Bes_one

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  3. poopis

    poopis Senior Member

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    yes ,loose the 2 top throws...there not gonna make it, your bottom 2 are pretty good there, but on the 2nd one on the bottom looks like a 5...your Y's are the shit just that S thats gettin in the way the first S at the bottom is the best play with that style S for a little.And when I saw SYN first thing that poped in my mind was state your name..


    EDIT: Bes the top extinstion at the top of the B doesnt looks so good ,with the arrow goind right and the middle of the E could be a little smoother ,also at the bottom of the E where it goes in looks a little off at the top. Overall I love that S and your B except the top part.
     
  4. Eskimo33

    Eskimo33 Senior Member

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    I believe there is already a SYN on this site cause i did a throwie for him in the exchange.
     
  5. fuckthatgame

    fuckthatgame Senior Member

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    ya sounded familiar to me 2....just revers it and me NYS or sumthin
     
  6. Baper Moves Kilos. <3

    Baper Moves Kilos. <3 Senior Member

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    d_g don't make the tail of the s that long b.

    some sketches, playing with the name "yells"

    ai42.photobucket.com_albums_e336_notvdoctor_yells1.jpg
    ai42.photobucket.com_albums_e336_notvdoctor_yells2.jpg

    and for the saber battle that i didnt enter hah:
    ai42.photobucket.com_albums_e336_notvdoctor_saber.jpg

    criticize me cap'n
     
  7. Eskimo33

    Eskimo33 Senior Member

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    Baper, I think that yells with the color would be bomb on the side of a train. Thats a very nice simple you got. I wish more people would understand how nice a good clean simple looks. Your saber piece is alot better then 90% of the entries.
     
  8. enuf.

    enuf. Senior Member

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    bes- take the top arrow off the s
    and one of the b.
    then it will look good.
     
  9. Stonk

    Stonk Senior Member

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    i dont like how in the hollow yells one you have the letters divided. But the top one is probably my favorite that i've seen from you

    aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v377_Canonfilmer_new011.jpg the fill was done with some shitty markers so try to look past that. also dont mind the pink tags, the orange ones are the ones i would prefer to be criticized
     
  10. poopis

    poopis Senior Member

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    looks alright to me... I'd love to see your tag philly style or w/e they call it with the "top fade" lots of good curves good tag. The PO and the D look pretty simple but good, your E is good too but it kinda doesnt fit with the style of your other letters. I like the orange coloring in that with the tiles n stuff.
     
  11. Baper Moves Kilos. <3

    Baper Moves Kilos. <3 Senior Member

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    try it with a drop shadow poed. i think that would fit that type of letters more nicely
     
  12. enuf.

    enuf. Senior Member

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    um. im assuming your talking about flare. maybe.

    this is directed toward poopis.
     
  13. eMJayBee

    eMJayBee Senior Member

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    Bes-one- Simples thats all, although you seem to know how to do your3-d
    Baper-I like the first one the most, different style...nice
    Stonk-That looks pretty good, Maybe make the 3-d a different color then the outline

    Somthin I did for a chicka friend, just did simples...Critz?
    [Broken External Image]:http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/scan0050.jpg
     
  14. fuckthatgame

    fuckthatgame Senior Member

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    That simple is super sick man!!!
    Diggin it to the maxx
     
  15. kicklip9634

    kicklip9634 Senior Member

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    ai14.tinypic.com_2ihw4nl.gif
    experimrntin with new names.. pen freestyle crits...
    emjaybee:Love the colors
     
  16. Eskimo33

    Eskimo33 Senior Member

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    kickflip, clean up your lines
     
  17. ASB_ONE

    ASB_ONE Senior Member

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    fucthatgame: yeh ayt ill exchange wat u write? ur letters are alright they jus need practice and make the hole in the R
    D_G: not rele likin them letters the e and the t are cool but s and a need some work
    bes: looks well rushed dope style though
    syn: bottom left throwie is tight jus work on the s as someone said it looks like 5 lose the rest tho
    baper: fresh, killin it as always
    poed: fresh simples keep it up man! same to you emjaybee
    kickflip: clean it up and it coulf look ayt

    lil new sketch fookd the m

    View attachment 236808
     
  18. kicklip9634

    kicklip9634 Senior Member

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    i dont like how the 3d on the M looks like it ovelaps.
     
  19. faime

    faime Senior Member

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    the m is fucked
     
  20. fuckthatgame

    fuckthatgame Senior Member

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    ASB i write KUR....ill try ta have somethin done by like friday