cmon boy dont do lrg like that!!!!!!!! if u cant copy it perfectly then leave it the fuc alone, its too good company to be fucd about with.
[Broken External Image]:http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r99/l33m/attix5-1.jpg Eh, still pretty toy, though only been at it for a few months. What can I say, I'm a chick I have other things to do. :/
prepare urself for all lil wee boys to be like omg!!!! theres a girl!!! can i have ur msn??? lol. but yeh clean it up and colour it... but id say u shud take it back a few steps... try sum simple letters??
[Broken External Image]:http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/4300/93cc1.jpg a lil quick sketch for waster, im gunna do a nice bigger one later, but any crits before i do?
do an R... lol but i would say improve the A a bit the loop bit is too small and doesnt really fit in... nice apart from that
ras i i think you got what i said twisted . . . I NEVER SAID DOING SIMPLES DONT HELP, that wuold be plain stupid (like some cats on here i think you only hear what you wanna hear) . . . i said you need to work on your letters (aka get better letter strucutre = go back to your basics and practice) but alos keep what unique styler/theme you have going and like to do . . rule #1 is master simples so you can do almost any letter quick and easy in your simple style . . and simple doesnt have to be block, i think those sketches for VPIK i did a few pages back are simple enough to start for RAS and most people on here . .practice tracing keyboard letters to learn line/bar spacing . . your lucky you got the nemzer on your ass cuz i think hes givin you tough love right now and tryin to help you out . . TRASH - wut up homie . .can you take alook at a 3d W i did last night and crit it up for me . . . if you got the time . . BIG UPS to bounce for doing the right thing . . . busting out countless pencil sketches gettin style and structure nows hes gonna win an advanced poll hands down . . he didnt get lucky, he has worked his style hard the right way and is seeing the benes now . . big ups
this was kust a doodle . . .i stoped adding those ledge things so thats why there are none on teh right side . . probaly wouldnt put so many on left side but i was just throwing them everywhere to see on what angle/surface tehy look best and highlight/reinforce teh 3d effect . .
Yo, throwie looks ok. tags really arent doin it for me. Its important when ur startin out (and it looks like ur planning on bombing) to keep ur shit as SIMPLE as possible when putting up. Theres nothing worse than starting out with a rep as an toy in ur neighbourhood, because its hard to win ur status back. Simple stuff, and getting the fuck up with balls will get you there. Trust me and stick to sketching, but dont let any of ur experimental stuff hit the streets. At the moment ur handstyles shouldnt be on the streets. The styles ur working with are honestly (no offence) copybook toy, sharp edges and acute angles like the skesh one. Keep it flowy. Also, dont much around with shit around ur tags, it just verifys the fact that ur tag is wack, a dope handstyle is simple, keep ur letters flowy, close together and thin. Keep working on it, i can see talent. How long have you been writing? And do you get up? [/b][/quote] Yeah I hated my Skesh handy, so I wanted a new one I loved this style, and came op with the letters DENG Its doesnt mean somethin, I just like it I write deng for like 2 days (in blackbooks and stuff) I have been sketching since ik think September and painting since uhm november? and I did like 4 bombs/throws And i dont think i'd get a rep as a toy, there are only like 4 taggers here around, and they are inactive as hell. yeah there are massive loads of people who write 3 tags, and thats it I'll post some tags soon in the toytags topic
wow man thats class.. really good like, nice style. only thing wrong the add ons look a bit wrong angle in places but thats really good, very stylish as well as 3d
[Broken External Image]:http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/5845/23710741037028093709289wc8.jpg The 3D gets so fucked in the places I circled.
Sky that shit's hot man. Never knew that you rocked 3-D shit. Loving it but it does seem like there is a lot more going on on the left than the right. EDIT...Just saw that you stopped adding stuff on the right side.
trash - im guessin your talkin about the right side of the W which seems to be flat compared to the left side of the W which steps/cliff down? anything more man? how about not having a traditional outline line where the bar bends/tunrs to teh other part of the 3d? i slightly erased the border/outline on teh right side of th W where it goes from light to kinda dark but left it (the outline line) on teh left side so it is clearly visible instead of just having the colors fade? instead of outline line there should i do a light trace of white when its colored?
bump [/b][/quote] i like how the end of teh H really comes out at you . . anyway you can add one or two more of those (extensions coming out toward teh viewer) in teh begining and middle of the piece? probaly at the bottom of the R it could work . .
[Broken External Image]:http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/3286/photo0006gi1.jpg waster 12... and i didnt bite anyone...
thanks an yea i know what u mean about the coming at you, i might do one as an extension on the T cos its kinda unnoticeable at the mo.. when painting 3d pieces i dont do an outline at all, but i choose shades and fade it so that when there is an outline like you did on the left side, you can clearly tell its another side of the shape. as for u getting some angles wrong, the right side is perfect, i just mean the 2 add ons in a column on the bottom of the left side, the higher one is pointing more up whereas it looks as if it should be the same as the one under, if you get me. and i think your W is well more stylish than my 3d stuff
[Broken External Image]:http://img464.imageshack.us/img464/4762/1202078lh3.jpg quick exchange sketch with aces . . messed up teh right side of the E and al of the A but the Z came our proper . . thanks for teh comments trash . . ill def keep it in mind from the burg eh . . . maybe try doing your K almost the exact same way you do your R . . . you got alot of work to do thoo man . .