Yeah I'm gonna be honest, I'm proper feeling that piece, especially the colour scheme, and dont really agree with most of what enigmatic has said ('slanting' ), but the only thing I do think you should change as you've said, is your A.

You thought or tried using a capital A? [/b][/quote]
yea i cant do them as well as small a's.. not that that small a is good as ive said before it was just a complete freestyle

 

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shitty but w/e...wish i never did the arrows

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u reali need to know ur stuctures on the S and A cuz it aint workin

 

snapple, it's a nice style, just refine it a bit. definitely get rid of the little extension bar thing on the bottom of the s, it looks retarded. keep working at it.

 

BUMP!!!

MEETER-like the throwie like ur style.

Snapple- work on the S and A like shamee said.

 

honestly i think your word forms are great, i dont think there is really anything wrong with it, when you get more comfortable with the letters, you can style them for some better flow and shit

good job overall, i like your throwie too

 

ras stop giving crits

you dont know what your talkin about

start fucking simple how many times does everyone have to tell you

 

nice sketch Sumoe
but i don't like that throw up much

 

Crits please, thanks. I'm really trying to improve, been doing simples since as long as I can remember. (I know this isnt simple)

 

the first E after the D is way too small, work on your letter structure a bit and it's a good start and you should continue to do simples, not that bad tho.

 

chop, get rid of the arrows and the heart, and make the s more pointed and square to fit the style of all the other letters. get rid of the extensions on the tops of the Es cause they're gross, and the i looks more like a t..

 

chop just get rid of the extensions you have a nice style going though i could tell it was you without looking at the username
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just want sum crits plz? tht 1 with the crappy arrows everywhere jus ignore n cldnt be arsed to colour it in cos its reli going nowhere lol so jus a few crits plz

 

I like them all but with all of the ones that sa "reak" you might wanna define your "k" coz it kinda looks like a deformed "h" to me ...

 

danny i think you should add more arrows

 

if its pointless and you don't care what the people in here think then why post your piece here and then re-post 20 mins later whining about not getting crits?

you posting here seems pretty pointless if you think that.

go and post in the advanced thread.



anyway..

i'm not really feeling all of the arrows in those pieces danny.


snapple - the piece is ok, bu as peeps are saying, the structure is key, and your S doesn't look right. keep at it tho.

oh and snapple, you didnt play tribes by any chance did you? An old PC Game..

 

posted twice, my bad.